Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/12/18, 3:16 PM
So Hooooooot!
Anonymous
7/12/18, 2:10 PM
i thought it was a good story, very sexy, great hypnosis, and like everyone i have only one opinion. i like it when stories are broken down into parts and have ability to read some, then wait for the next part. or have many parts but can read one. digest it, then read another when have time. still, i am sure others will disagree and want the all or nothing posti
AeonFlux
7/12/18, 2:08 PM
Next chapter please ....... let us all know the downfall of the elders
MalSkin
7/12/18, 8:26 AM
I always like these types of stores thanks for writing would have been interesting if they had called into a suitable shop for a change of clothing
Anonymous
7/12/18, 8:16 AM
So fucking hot. Love seeing an update from you Will. +1 for having a patreon.
Max
7/12/18, 6:56 AM
So it's a great story but there are a lot of points in there with wrong spelling, and there was a sentence where they said it's amazing what you can do with 4 people, where is number 4?i only counted 3 people
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
7/12/18, 5:19 AM
Wow! So hot to be changed into such a pervert!!
Martin
7/12/18, 4:59 AM
drgnawbones, please let me know what troubles you have with the editing. You can write me at martin@gayspiralstories.com or in the forum. One advice: As an author it's a very good idea to create an account and make sure that you're logged on when submitting a story, otherwise you won't be able to see the ratings and access statistics for the story and it's much harder to edit it.
blankbot
7/12/18, 4:44 AM
Your story is well written and very, ahem...satisfying. Please continue it.
Swizzington
7/12/18, 4:43 AM
Any update has to be approved by the site overlords, so even if you make a change it won't show immediately.