Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/8/24, 8:28 PM
Superb story. Would have loved a few more physical descriptions (body type, hair styles, piercing locations) but outside of that this was near perfect. Hoping the series continues :)

10/8/24, 8:41 PM
@Anonymous Thank you! This was intended as a one-shot, but I'll keep those in mind if I decide to make some kind of continuation. Glad you enjoyed it!
10/5/24, 9:20 PM
Loved the story so much. White shirts are the only shirts to wear.

10/6/24, 6:28 PM
Yes @J.J, I agree and I would encourage everyone reading this to seriously consider wearing a white shirt and tie every single day, 7 days a week just as our missionary friends do here.

10/6/24, 9:35 PM
@[BSuited](/user/show/10003178) I try to as much as possible :)

10/7/24, 8:41 AM
I honestly am, I have a whole new wardrobe now with kudos to my new Mormon friends for advice on how to dress

10/7/24, 11:50 PM
@[GoodBoy](/user/show/1900997) Thanks guys and it's Halloween so should be able to sport them freely for a "party your heading or just left".

10/8/24, 7:45 PM
@[GoodBoy](/user/show/1900997) With short sleeve shirts as well?
Jul 6, 2022
10/8/24, 11:53 AM
Please resurrect this - so hot, and I need to know what happens next!

Lampshade15
10/8/24, 7:38 PM
@[DorothyZbornak](/user/show/977065) I agree!
10/8/24, 4:48 PM
Hi folks I’m working on the next chapter now
10/8/24, 3:36 PM
Awesome. The sort of club we would all join! Frogglechock!
10/8/24, 3:21 PM
Terrific idea and so beautifully written - seduction by cocktail...the gallery bar reminded me of the main hall in a certain club in Glasgow where gentlemen of a certain business acumen meet! I wonder what happens when the clock strikes twelve...and as for the smoking room...mmmmm
10/8/24, 3:07 PM
Thank you for the feedback! Yes, I am working on a new, final chapter. Glad you liked it.
10/8/24, 3:05 PM
Hot mindless sex...and a controlling Master...what could be better? The next chapter likely!
10/8/24, 2:58 PM
Great story idea...daddy taking control over his boy again and the boy finding he loves it! Always well written and with that teasing hook about what the Dr will do...mmmmm
10/8/24, 6:24 AM
I liked this a lot. Wish it was longer tho. And would have been nice to be introduced to some of the other guys at the gym... maybe some guys that Connor had seen early on and then they were different later after getting inducted into the program. Also is the transformation/growth complete with one session or was that just the first step and changes continue to happen? Those were the kinds of things I was thinking about.

10/8/24, 6:45 AM
@[Pwrliftermscl](/user/show/941605) glad you liked it! with the serum he’s permanently jacked/stupified! he’s also the first convert/employee of the gym, apart from the owner, i should have specified this. if i add another part, i’ll have Connor become the next recruiter, taking the young unsuspecting jocks that wander off alone into the gym, turning them into dumb himbo’s, like himself.