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10/7/24, 4:18 PM
This chapter pretty much confirmed what I was suspecting from the previous chapter. That H-3 is a Tri-Hard creation. And like every servant there are two things they crave above all else: purpose and fulfillment. And I suspect this will cause a confrontation between two sets of Tri-Hard followers. The mechanical vs the rubber (hopefully this comes back!) A possible fight to see who is the true Tri-Hard? Or maybe an eventual fusion of the two? Maybe the nanotech that makes up the silver casing gets programmed to become rubber instead? Having the crawlers ensnare their 'prey' in rubber cocoons or the such to be carried away seems really cool. Or altering the heroes spandex uniforms into rubber with nanotech? But there is one thing that has me wondering. Is the new Tri-Hard (Nick) have any tech or science skills with his creation? Or is he more of a domineering Master? Because if he does, then that is going to be a cool showdown.

10/7/24, 4:57 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) HEY! Shhh! Sometimes when you think out loud you happen to think a little _too much!_ :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes: Now I can't even comment on the bits that aren't spoilers without giving away what is! Ha ha,... Oh, except rubber. I can tell you that there's rubber coming, but our two main villain camps have to settle into their comfort zones before they can explore that potential!

10/7/24, 7:27 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Yeah... Got carried away. Kinda sorry, not sorry. 😝. But I also realized this will be a cool way to showcase different forms of submission, control, and obedience between the three bad guys. And how if at all, will any under their control feel about one way or another?
10/7/24, 7:10 PM
The setting has moved from the campground to their nest, which is an unexpected transition! I'm looking forward to seeing how Ian's kingdom will operate with the other victims.
10/7/24, 3:38 AM
Such a hot story. I reread it from time to time and it still gets me going!

10/7/24, 5:39 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) This means a lot to me! Thank you.
10/7/24, 5:01 PM
Loving how things are spiraling out of control and with the coach now having plans. Interested to see which side prevails in this conpetition of control
Sep 4, 2024
Anonymous
9/5/24, 2:19 AM
Great story! If you decide to continue it, I would love to read more. I would love to see Cody somehow trick his friends to getting some bad coin flips as well, but thats just my personal view, I'd read it regardless of the direction you took.

10/7/24, 4:58 PM
@Anonymous Thanks! I’d love to revisit this one at some point.
10/6/24, 9:26 PM
I loved it

10/7/24, 2:36 PM
@[Phil427636](/user/show/915077) Thanks!
LthrFog
10/7/24, 5:13 AM
Great writing — could never tell English isn't your first language — with even better imagery. The description of the vampire's fog coalescing like a cocoon with something growing & taking shape inside hit the nail on the head. Kudos! And please keep it up.

10/7/24, 2:34 PM
@LthrFog Thank you! I have a few more ideas in mind, we'll see how they turn out!
10/7/24, 10:48 AM
I absolutely love a good story about vampires, wish there were more like this around here! It was very well written and it was really fun to read (you know what kind of fun😈) but I would have loved to read more about the transformation and post-transformation as they are what I enjoy the most. Nevertheless, I loved the story and it's definitely going to my favourite story list. Keep going!

10/7/24, 2:32 PM
@[SmokingVampire](/user/show/10001507) Very much appreciated! I've already read a couple vampire stories on this site that I thought were excellent, but it's still not enough in my opinion, hah. As for your criticism, I'll agree that I enjoy a nice, descriptive transformation scene, and I even considered expanding on the final scene with our protagonist turned, but I felt that they didn't mesh too well with the rest of the story. I'll definitely keep it in mind for future projects though, so thanks, and happy to see another vamp fan around these parts!
10/6/24, 4:20 PM
Hi, and thanks for reading this story. I hope you enjoyed it! This is the first one I've decided to publish, and also English isn't my first language, so it'll probably be a bit messy. First time posting on this site as well, so apologies if things aren't tagged properly -- feel free to make any corrections if needed, and I'll be happy to hear any feedback.

10/7/24, 12:25 AM
@[MonsterfuckerAnonymous](/user/show/10055289) This is very well written. Scary and sexy! You are talented and should continue to contribute! Great addition to the site!

10/7/24, 2:17 PM
@[Mrdick](/user/show/1001656) Thank you! I have a handful of other short stories I haven't published, might polish them up so I can post them here!
Jul 19, 2024
10/7/24, 4:03 AM
And he paid off the cops to set up his own brother.