Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/4/18, 8:20 PM
Make them eat throw up
Anonymous
7/4/18, 7:12 PM
So hot, would be cool if they came to love him/raunch
7/4/18, 6:33 PM
Holy crap, that was so fucking hot! Also, the way you kept track of all the overlapping commands was really well done. Thanks for this amazing story
blanbot
7/4/18, 6:01 PM
Your story, The Submarine, is one of my all-time favorites--imaginative and erotic. This is a promising start for another great read. Good boy, PupScout! WOOF!
Swizzington
7/4/18, 5:59 PM
I am not Edlam but it clearly says at the top it is a standalone piece. So I would imagine it will not continue.
ForgottenCradle
7/4/18, 5:48 PM
I'm a simple man. I see an Edlam story, I click. Again a hot and amazing piece. The way of obliviousness in your stories is on another level. I love it. And nice to see some character growth on Larry's part and him taking care of his inhibitions After all that praise, a question...is this a one shot or will this continue?
Anonymous
7/4/18, 5:40 PM
make some dogplay u know there is much more humiliating things than scat.
Anonymous
7/4/18, 5:39 PM
stop it it is the worst full of shit and scat. and the guy is too evil. it would have been nice if it had been a revenge it makes me sick
Anonymous
7/4/18, 5:38 PM
Quite hot. I like it.
Bibimbap
7/4/18, 5:20 PM
Hi! It's a great start, I like the way in that the story is told, and the rename is always something that I enjoy, I think it's a great way to reinforce the dominion. If you allow me a suggestion, don't make them go around totally naked. I know some people like that, but to me, that ruins the pup transformation stories. Is way too simple! too boring! especially when you have sexy uniformed men in the story, make them go around simply naked is a waste of good uniforms and chances to make them part of the story. Firefighter uniforms are very sexy, with those sexy boots and helmets,so you could make them wear modified uniforms or spoof uniforms with the pup theme. Would be hot to see them doing their work now. And I'm curious of how you're gonna add the piss element that you put on the tags of the story. I'm looking forward to read the next chapter!