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Anonymous
7/4/18, 5:39 PM
stop it it is the worst full of shit and scat. and the guy is too evil. it would have been nice if it had been a revenge it makes me sick
Anonymous
7/4/18, 5:38 PM
Quite hot. I like it.
Bibimbap
7/4/18, 5:20 PM
Hi! It's a great start, I like the way in that the story is told, and the rename is always something that I enjoy, I think it's a great way to reinforce the dominion. If you allow me a suggestion, don't make them go around totally naked. I know some people like that, but to me, that ruins the pup transformation stories. Is way too simple! too boring! especially when you have sexy uniformed men in the story, make them go around simply naked is a waste of good uniforms and chances to make them part of the story. Firefighter uniforms are very sexy, with those sexy boots and helmets,so you could make them wear modified uniforms or spoof uniforms with the pup theme. Would be hot to see them doing their work now. And I'm curious of how you're gonna add the piss element that you put on the tags of the story. I'm looking forward to read the next chapter!
Corinthian
7/4/18, 4:44 PM
Such potential - have you read 120 Days of Sodom?
Anonymous
7/4/18, 3:34 PM
I have really enjoyed this series. making big guys. i wish i ran into this chat partner
7/4/18, 3:21 PM
@MasterJerker Yeah, a lot of religious stuff (that are slightly homophobic) have a lot of homoerotic scenes. There were so many moments in the Extinct episodes where they really make good gay scenes. (The show Extinct had a large Mormon undertone, and it didn't help that the men dominated most of it.) I will try to set up more context and preparation next time. I'm trying to gather more ideas for now, but I already picked out some good dialogue that I can incorporate into my own writing. For example, in episode 8, one of the SkinRiders said, "You see we won’t have to torture you. By midday tomorrow you’ll tell us everything without me even asking."
7/4/18, 2:57 PM
This is still one of my favorite stories, years later.
7/4/18, 2:53 PM
There is certainly potential here in this idea, I so feel the stroy was a bit abrupt in both beginning and end. Nonetheless I would be interested in seeing more written, this is a world I'm curious about now.
Anonymous
7/4/18, 2:51 PM
Glad you are back, Edlam! You are one of my favorite writers.
Swizzington
7/4/18, 2:31 PM
Oh shit. That was awesome. I guess the magic is what lets him cum so much? That was the only part that seemed a little far-fetched. Loved it!