Recent Comments

7/3/18, 8:39 PM
Great stoyr! BTW, the link to the "sexy butler outfit" in the middle of the story is broken...it's missing the final "g" in ".jpg".
Anonymous
7/3/18, 8:33 PM
Great story Thanks
Anonymous
7/3/18, 7:33 PM
Awesome work
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
7/3/18, 7:16 PM
Where can I buy those speedos? There are links to pictures, there should be product links as well :)
7/3/18, 7:01 PM
@commentor before me Yeah, it was just a spark of inspiration, though I do agree it could have been much longer. I think I might add some transitional time phrases, like "After a few minutes or The next day..." and make the story longer in general. I think my biggest weakness is trying to describe characters and actions more descriptively, and even describe the environment more. I might challenge myself to write a part 2, and take more time constructing the story. Also I can't edit my story, because I made a few grammatical errors, but whenever I tried to edit the story, it fails. Does anyone know how to fix this problem?
Anonymous
7/3/18, 6:42 PM
Make them wear use diapers
Anonymous
7/3/18, 6:40 PM
It might just be me but this seems a bit short and abrupt. The description given though sounds like a neat idea
Jim valen
7/3/18, 4:32 PM
I like how the father and son started to spin the relationship based on the suggestion. So fucking hot. As an avid cock sucker I enjoy the oral aspects the most. I know health issues make writing difficult. I hope it works out well.
Anonymous
7/3/18, 3:15 PM
Please update soon
Anonymous
7/3/18, 3:04 PM
Terrific