Recent Comments

Cooper
7/3/18, 10:52 PM
Will you be adding anymore parts to this story. Please say yes, it’s so fucking good. I feel like it needs more.
7/3/18, 9:47 PM
Opps. For some reason, my last comment showed up as "posted by Martin". Really sorry that happened for some odd reason. But I changed my account profile name now. I tried to clear the cache and also reload the page, but it doesn't seem to work. It would send me to the page, "Oh! Either you are trying to find a page that no longer exists, or an error has occurred. Either way, try going to the Home Page and starting over?"
Martin
7/3/18, 9:32 PM
Oh, I just used a different acronyms, because the first acronym was no longer possible. It needed more than 3 characters. The original was "S." which standed for Submissive, but I changed it to "G.B." in order to satisfy the requirement to post a story.. I will try to clear my cache and reload. I do get stats and ratings.
Martin
7/3/18, 9:00 PM
@G.B. First of all, the "author name" in your account doesn't match the name you used here. If you're logged in, you should be able to edit your story just fine. If you get an error, please clear your browser cache or force a reload of the page when your story is displayed. Do you get the reading stats and ratings statistics displayed on your story?
7/3/18, 8:39 PM
Great stoyr! BTW, the link to the "sexy butler outfit" in the middle of the story is broken...it's missing the final "g" in ".jpg".
Anonymous
7/3/18, 8:33 PM
Great story Thanks
Anonymous
7/3/18, 7:33 PM
Awesome work
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
7/3/18, 7:16 PM
Where can I buy those speedos? There are links to pictures, there should be product links as well :)
7/3/18, 7:01 PM
@commentor before me Yeah, it was just a spark of inspiration, though I do agree it could have been much longer. I think I might add some transitional time phrases, like "After a few minutes or The next day..." and make the story longer in general. I think my biggest weakness is trying to describe characters and actions more descriptively, and even describe the environment more. I might challenge myself to write a part 2, and take more time constructing the story. Also I can't edit my story, because I made a few grammatical errors, but whenever I tried to edit the story, it fails. Does anyone know how to fix this problem?
Anonymous
7/3/18, 6:42 PM
Make them wear use diapers