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Anonymous
6/30/18, 2:45 PM
I like the plot twist ending! My assumption is that the computer had the power to change people depending on what is typed, so I guess Felix used that to change Darren in the end.
Timet
6/30/18, 9:41 AM
Excellent story, can't wait until case 2
wang@yopmail.com
6/30/18, 8:45 AM
the best of the best, like always
Jun 29, 2018
Anonymous
6/30/18, 7:55 AM
This is so hot Alexa play despacito
J.J.
6/30/18, 6:54 AM
This was so hot! But will you be delving more into the assimilation process in the next part? Like just how the alien takes over their minds, what kind of a state it leaves them in, and will the heroes actually do the tentacles's bidding once they are assimilated or are they merely plant food trapped in a cocoon forever? Please continue.
Jun 29, 2018
Anonymous
6/30/18, 6:40 AM
I would to see Burt take the same questionnaire
Jun 27, 2018
Anonymous
6/30/18, 5:12 AM
The concept is great, but you need to proofread. The name get mixed up a couple of times.
Jun 29, 2018
Anonymous
6/30/18, 5:11 AM
You should credit baralai for this. It's good tho, just need some proofreading. And Please Don't Type Like This. Use capital accordingly.
Anonymous
6/30/18, 4:31 AM
Incredible story. Best I’ve read in a while!
Jun 29, 2018
Anonymous
6/30/18, 3:45 AM
Not an original story when you're copying from another blog contributor.