Recent Comments

Jun 29, 2018
Anonymous
6/29/18, 3:40 PM
Really like the survey part of it. Reminded me of house guest: the application by baralai, a huge plus in my opinion.
Jun 29, 2018
6/29/18, 3:01 PM
very hot story
Max
6/29/18, 2:39 PM
Being changed into a tall muscular hairy young bear wouldn't make one a "victim" ;) I really wish This would happen to me but until then the most I can do is go to the gym and maybe get a beard transplant
JR
6/29/18, 8:20 AM
More please!!
Jun 27, 2018
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
6/29/18, 5:13 AM
Being a slut can be so rewarding, as the cops found out!
Anonymous
6/29/18, 3:59 AM
Very interesting idea, but the writing could use a little improvement. You didn't show so much as tell the reader what happened. It sounds like you have a creative mind, but it doesn't come across very well because parts of the story just feel like a summary -- there isn't any particular moment that I'm immersed in the events or descriptions. There's great potential here!
OLIVER
6/29/18, 3:50 AM
DON'T POST THE NEXT CHAPTER UNTIL IT'S READY CLOWNBOI! DON'T WORRY ABOUT ONE OR TWO COMMENTS! THEY WILL READ CHAPTER 4 WHEN YOU'RE FINISHED WITH IT! BELIEVE ME THEY'RE NOT GOING ANYWHERE! (P.S. CUT THE WRITERS A LITTLE SLACK, WILL YA, PEOPLE? THIS ISN'T THEIR JOB AND THERE'S NO DEADLINES! REMEMBER, THE STORIES ARE FREE AND WRITTEN FOR OUR ENJOYMENT SO IT'S FINE TO SHOW YOUR APPRECIATION BUT DON'T BE PUSHY, OKAY?)
6/29/18, 3:41 AM
Wonderful Story!
6/29/18, 3:02 AM
Hard as a rock through the entire transformation of younger brother. Bravo!
bikerbro
6/29/18, 2:01 AM
Love the entire concept of this - not just the chatroom/cam method of TF, but the subtle changes in usernames, the fact the victim KNOWS something's wrong but can't quite place it, having someone blatantly influence and command the changes...Gah, it ticks every box, man - well worth a read.