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Jun 26, 2018
AgainstMyWill
6/28/18, 6:16 PM
Love the concept and it made me hard - I like how aggressive his roommate is in their interactions, and the fake-out apology at the end with the physical forcing into submission was really hot. I agree with those who say the writing could use more structure and clarity, though that's a detail I think compared to the pacing. I'd have loved more - after his roommate enslaved him seeing a slow descent into him being nothing but a dumb slut. I'd imagined when you remarked that the roommate wasn't studying at all that it was going to be some sort of intellect theft where the roommate got smarter by draining the smarts from the main character. I'm biased here because NickyNixville's Desmond Brothers is one of my favorites - I'm thinking of that pacing, the way they rub it in that the hapless guy getting dumber can't help himself, the way they taunt him by suggesting that he stop if he doesn't want to get dumber, knowing full well he can't stop anymore. I think this story could be drawn out much longer with day after day of the roommate teasing the hapless main character as he drains his brain bit by bit and turns him irrevocably into a cock slut. A few more of those fake outs would be great - letting him believe he might have escaped, or letting him think he'd turned the tables briefly...
Jun 27, 2018
corinthian
6/28/18, 5:13 PM
Such a good story - many thanks!
Jun 27, 2018
Anonymous
6/28/18, 4:38 PM
Goodnight*
HeroLuver
6/28/18, 8:20 AM
Unfortunately there are always going to be a few impatient people out there. Just keep writing at your own pace and take your time to tell YOUR story. And THANKS for sharing it with the rest of us, Clown Boi.
Jun 27, 2018
Anonymous
6/28/18, 8:16 AM
Hotttt thank u It was also funny, especially the goodbye kiss U should make more of such role reversal... i think it is called
Jun 27, 2018
Anonymous
6/28/18, 6:16 AM
A shame Baldur didn't do more, but lovely story nonetheless. XD
Oink
6/28/18, 4:05 AM
Hot as fuck. I agree with dirtyrawhungfl. Love unwipwd mussy. Oink
Clownboi
6/28/18, 2:44 AM
Guys I’m gonna be frank I have a huge workload. So going forward I’m not going to guarantee when I release a story. I don’t want to be hounded if it’s 10 days rather than a week. I have one day a week to do this plus other things. It was meant to be for leisure. I really appreciate all the positive comments and will be continuing at my own pace rather than release something that time and effort has not went into. Thanks for all your support. And as a spoiler after Tarzan chapter the dynamic duo go through a very big change :) I like to think what happens to Captain America is probably going to be very popular. Second of course to superman’s final fate. As a spoiler I’ll say all the ex heroes are contributing to superman’s demise ;)
Jun 27, 2018
Anonymous
6/28/18, 2:39 AM
Very hot. Thanks for writing.
Jun 26, 2018
Sanchezinc
6/28/18, 2:38 AM
I liked it, yes it could use some proofreading. But not that hard to follow. Wish a bit more of his life after dumbing down would be mentioned. Maybe for a sequel?