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6/29/18, 1:13 AM
Dude I love your Tumblr. Glad your branching out.
Anonymous
6/28/18, 10:29 PM
cuntine it, please, lets see some porn-making and the mass transformation of police officers
Jun 27, 2018
Anonymous
6/28/18, 9:45 PM
Loved how the obliviousness kept increasing as the story progressed, particularly Baldur, with him so angry at not getting some navy seal dick Always look forward to Thkon stories
Jun 26, 2018
bimarguy
6/28/18, 7:59 PM
Overall not bad but I hope you continue this as I think it will help Taylor's mental loss. I'd like to see what happens to Simon as it appears this is the first time he has used his abilities in a guy who happens to be gay ,as before it looks like he did this to women .anyway I enjoyed so thanks for taking time to write as that's why I'm here hehe. If it helps I see Martin put a link to assist writers in avoiding the grammar police give it a try
6/28/18, 6:19 PM
Wish that I had someone like Nelson to control me.
Anonymous
6/28/18, 6:17 PM
One of the hottest stories on here for a while. I want some of that beer!
Jun 26, 2018
AgainstMyWill
6/28/18, 6:16 PM
Love the concept and it made me hard - I like how aggressive his roommate is in their interactions, and the fake-out apology at the end with the physical forcing into submission was really hot. I agree with those who say the writing could use more structure and clarity, though that's a detail I think compared to the pacing. I'd have loved more - after his roommate enslaved him seeing a slow descent into him being nothing but a dumb slut. I'd imagined when you remarked that the roommate wasn't studying at all that it was going to be some sort of intellect theft where the roommate got smarter by draining the smarts from the main character. I'm biased here because NickyNixville's Desmond Brothers is one of my favorites - I'm thinking of that pacing, the way they rub it in that the hapless guy getting dumber can't help himself, the way they taunt him by suggesting that he stop if he doesn't want to get dumber, knowing full well he can't stop anymore. I think this story could be drawn out much longer with day after day of the roommate teasing the hapless main character as he drains his brain bit by bit and turns him irrevocably into a cock slut. A few more of those fake outs would be great - letting him believe he might have escaped, or letting him think he'd turned the tables briefly...
Jun 27, 2018
corinthian
6/28/18, 5:13 PM
Such a good story - many thanks!
Jun 27, 2018
Anonymous
6/28/18, 4:38 PM
Goodnight*
HeroLuver
6/28/18, 8:20 AM
Unfortunately there are always going to be a few impatient people out there. Just keep writing at your own pace and take your time to tell YOUR story. And THANKS for sharing it with the rest of us, Clown Boi.