Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/27/18, 3:55 AM
I love the series. Keep going
Anonymous
6/27/18, 3:55 AM
Great start hope there us more
Jun 26, 2018
Anonymous
6/27/18, 3:36 AM
not a fan for dumbing stories
Jun 26, 2018
Swizzington
6/27/18, 3:30 AM
Oh, I didn't realize that. Don't think I've ever seen it before. I guess you learn something new everyday!
Anonymous
6/27/18, 3:29 AM
Interesting premise.
Swizzington
6/27/18, 3:28 AM
I love this type of story, where we get to see the victim's thoughts being changed in real time, while he remains totally unaware of it. Great story - short and sweet.
Jun 26, 2018
Anonymous
6/27/18, 3:28 AM
If the author is European, some use dashes. That wasn't the problem. Everything else was so hard to read that I gave up. Hopefully other readers will appreciate the story.
Anonymous
6/27/18, 3:22 AM
I was thinking the same thing. I think the other guys were just hotties at the gym and were part of the original scheme to establish a whore house at the gym. Sam was put in the mix when Sonny found about the theft. I'm just guessing. I really don't know.
6/27/18, 3:19 AM
Ok I'm confused. If Sam stole the money why are the other guys involved? What did they do to deserve such treatment? Maybe I missed something.