Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/27/18, 3:22 AM
I was thinking the same thing. I think the other guys were just hotties at the gym and were part of the original scheme to establish a whore house at the gym. Sam was put in the mix when Sonny found about the theft. I'm just guessing. I really don't know.
6/27/18, 3:19 AM
Ok I'm confused. If Sam stole the money why are the other guys involved? What did they do to deserve such treatment? Maybe I missed something.
Anonymous
6/27/18, 3:15 AM
I did not expect an update for this series! Im so glad that you are still continuing this story
6/27/18, 2:25 AM
I have to say, I'M loving these rewrites of classic straight hypno stories. This, honestly, is a masterpiece. FANTASTIC work, Yourmind!
6/27/18, 1:58 AM
Hey I'm glad you enjoyed it! This series is actually all commissioned so I can't take all the credit. Thats a pretty good idea though, splitting the two up like that. Who knows where this series will go? 😉
Sean
6/27/18, 12:05 AM
Please write more stories ;)
Jun 26, 2018
Swizzington
6/26/18, 11:24 PM
May I ask why you opted to use dashes instead of quotation marks to signify dialogue? It makes it a little hard to read. Maybe that's just me.
Anonymous
6/26/18, 10:42 PM
Love the start! Can’t wait to read more!
Anonymous
6/26/18, 9:57 PM
When can we see the next chapter, daring?
Sep 13, 2009
6/26/18, 6:56 PM
Man, I love stories where the people getting mind controlled are aware of what's happening, but most of them are written really badly and awkward. This one on the other hand is so amazingly written, it's one of my favourite stories on this site! I also love that small, unathletic gay custodian is the top while the four muscular jocks are the bottoms. Most stories don't do that even though its super hot. Thank you for this story!