Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/26/18, 10:42 PM
Love the start! Can’t wait to read more!
Anonymous
6/26/18, 9:57 PM
When can we see the next chapter, daring?
Sep 13, 2009
6/26/18, 6:56 PM
Man, I love stories where the people getting mind controlled are aware of what's happening, but most of them are written really badly and awkward. This one on the other hand is so amazingly written, it's one of my favourite stories on this site! I also love that small, unathletic gay custodian is the top while the four muscular jocks are the bottoms. Most stories don't do that even though its super hot. Thank you for this story!
6/26/18, 6:51 PM
Hey guys: Swizzington is right in that there are no more chapters by Iron Nick for this story, and there likely never will be as the story, while hinting at a larger story involving the acquisition of Sean's powers, is pretty self-contained. If you guys want, I could write a second chapter for the story myself. I'm pretty new to writing fiction, but if you guys want a part 2, I'll try writing it.
Anonymous
6/26/18, 4:43 PM
How did his grandfather give him this power and what’s going to happen next
M
6/26/18, 4:03 PM
Hot story! Is there a chance for a part 2???
Anonymous
6/26/18, 3:19 PM
Can you continue this please?
Swizzington
6/26/18, 3:09 PM
I loved this. As this is an adaptation, and there were no more chapters in the original (as far as I know), there won't be any more chapters here, right?
Anonymous
6/26/18, 3:03 PM
Interesting!!!
6/26/18, 2:46 PM
Great story. Hopefully some more chapters coming