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Anonymous
6/21/18, 5:48 PM
Hi author, can you share me the link to the story that you adapt from?
Anonymous
6/21/18, 1:34 PM
Focus more on the transformation aspect because I would imagine bones breaking, joints shifting, the feeling of fur growing, the agonizing pain of a tail forming , humanity surrendering to the feral beast the tortured screams of transformation as they are bathed in moonlight
Piso Mojado
6/21/18, 1:19 PM
It would appear you are overwhelmingly favoured and commenter # 3 is commonly held to be an idiot. They ayes carry.
Anonymous
6/21/18, 8:46 AM
I agree that this needs a sequel. There was a lot of build up but the MC/sex bits are very short in comparison. Do you want any help proofreading?
Malskin
6/21/18, 6:09 AM
really liked the story as soon as I saw cop you got my interest. as to comment 3. they do not sign there name and someone who comes here to read and JO to stories but may never have put pen to paper. criticism is good if it constructive -plz carry on writing
Jun 20, 2018
Anonymous
6/21/18, 5:07 AM
There's no tag that says straight to gay lol.
Anonymous
6/21/18, 4:04 AM
I liked the concept, the flow and the pace. You have the material to make a full story out of his. Of gratuitous unsolicited comments such as comment 3. if it was so torturous he should have stopped. No one benefits from brow beating then a morsel to snack on. how self important. Keep writing and follow this thread. Do recruit his brother and expand on ascension and rank. This could be a hot series.
6/21/18, 3:54 AM
Did someone say cop? Pack? Transformation? Werewolf? Alpha! WOOF!! Bite me Alpha, I want to be a member of the pack. Story was good. I like the transformation. I wish he had had a partner there for someone to watch the transformation and then his transformed partner bites him. But I guess that is coming with the brother. Pay no attention to previous critiques. It held my attention, had good transformation (just as hot to me as any mind control or hypno) and had touches of good eroticism (all werewolves are gay...WOOF! MAN PACK!) Keep writing. Woof.
Jun 20, 2018
Anonymous
6/21/18, 3:08 AM
Hot!!!
Anonymous
6/21/18, 3:02 AM
Not sure where this is headed, but I want to read the next chapter.