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Anonymous
6/21/18, 3:02 AM
Not sure where this is headed, but I want to read the next chapter.
Willie Cici
6/21/18, 3:01 AM
To the author of Comment 3 -- Chill the fuck out!! It's very easy to complain and criticize. It's another thing to actually put pen to paper and create. Follow Hypnothrill's advice. He's a great writer, the best one on this site. Keep writing. If you're having fun and enjoying the creative process, keep writing. And don't let anyone stop you.
Anonymous
6/21/18, 2:06 AM
I like this story The only question is: How to came in pants when wearing nothing but a thong?
Anonymous
6/21/18, 12:40 AM
That critique of "grammar and spelling!!!!" not only brings nothing to the table, but it's wrong as most of the piece is decently punctuated and spelled correctly; not to mention the rest of the comment is discouraging as fuck, if not downright insulting. It's a put-down from beginning to end and ensures that we get less content on this site. The entire critique comes off as little more than a beatdown. "I stuck with this story, but it was torture." Seriously? "Read some of the other writers on this site, like Hypnothrill, who gave you an INCREDIBLE compliment when he saw the genius in the last story you posted," like, how smarmy can you get? The entire comment is the sort of thing I'd give the other kids in middle-school English because I thought I was smarter than everyone else, because I wrote prettier poetry. This doesn't encourage growth or continuous writing. There's always room for improvement, but going up to authors and rubbing their noses in mistakes like a naughty dog and a carpet stain helps no one. In fact, I'd call it pretty vile. There's no reason to talk to a content creator on this site like that. They could post a 2-page, misspelled-every-other-word, sexless story with no punctuation and there's no reason to talk to a content creator on here like that. Criticism is meant to help someone improve. Turning up your nose and saying "did you know spellcheck exists?" in the greasiest way possible, as just a start to what you have to say, doesn't do that. If you have to add the aside of "having done all that bashing" to your comment, you shouldn't post that damn comment. And hey, if none of that gets through to you: better critique means better writers. Your critique was bad. If you sincerely want better content on this site, start with yourself.
Anonymous
6/21/18, 12:00 AM
I think the above criticism is a bit harsh. I liked the story and hope to see it continue. Please keep writing, MasterJerker. I, for one, am a fan of your work.
6/20/18, 10:00 PM
Well, I really liked it, and I didn't see obvious spelling and grammar mistakes. I felt like this was a fresh take on werewolf stories. And I hope that Master Jerker chooses to write a sequel, so that we can see the mental transformation in more detail the next time.
Anonymous
6/20/18, 9:47 PM
We need more chapters!
Jun 20, 2018
AeonFlux
6/20/18, 9:12 PM
Perfect for me
Jun 20, 2018
Anonymous
6/20/18, 6:53 PM
So -- who wasn't gay that became gay? I'm confused. It was hot, but I'm confused.
Anonymous
6/20/18, 6:48 PM
Well, let me say it: this was poorly written. Do you understand that writing means 'editing?" Something as simple as hitting SpellCheck and GrammarCheck on MSWord. The program will do it for you. It's the simple things like punctuation, usage, that make a 'potentially good story' into a nuisance. I stuck with the story because it intrigued me, but it was torture. And, sadly, I also agree with the last comment. Where's the mind control? How does it happen? We can see the Alpha change, but how did the cop? Having done all that bashing: Don't stop writing -- just pay a little more attention to the detail. Read some of the other writers on his site, like Hypnothrill, who gave you an incredible compliment when he saw the genius in the last story you posted and developed the story line further. His story was well written! It can be done. Even for a website that posts erotica!!! It can be done!!