Recent Comments

cc532c@att.net
6/18/18, 9:07 PM
Had the same prob with killing Jimmy -- could have given him a humiliating fate, but it's your story, and you did it VERY well. You have a fast & vivid style that works well in this format.
Anonymous
6/18/18, 8:49 PM
Hot!!!
Clown boi
6/18/18, 8:22 PM
Thanks to everyone for all the wonderful comments. I don’t put it on here to earn praise or please others. I’m exploring an idea. I literally know where I’m going with every chapter. And now every chapter will focus on a hero. I work 75 hours a week so free time is tough. Frankly I’m not a fan of a quick wave and a superhero is captured. My villain likes to enjoy his prey. Next chapter next week where Tarzan has a whole new outlook on life.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
6/18/18, 6:59 PM
Can I post my phone number for one of these calls?
JerkinBeforeWork
6/18/18, 6:32 PM
hell yeah! This is my go to story for a quick jerk off!! So hot!!!
Anonymous
6/18/18, 4:32 PM
I have three words for chapter three more more more
6/18/18, 3:19 PM
Great story. Hoping new chapters
J.J.
6/18/18, 2:49 PM
Another awesome chapter. I'm really loving this story. Please continue.
Keinok
6/18/18, 2:43 PM
Awesome story hopefully there are more of them.
Lenny
6/18/18, 1:51 PM
Gayed. Muscled. Still smart- you can have your cakes and eat them too. Fun story.