Recent Comments

6/18/18, 3:28 AM
Loved it! I would consider this a happy ending, so double love it! :D
AtlantaDevil
6/18/18, 2:30 AM
Auspicious beginning? Seconds?
Anonymous
6/18/18, 2:11 AM
Very hot!!!
Anonymous
6/18/18, 12:50 AM
Nice one!
Brock11752
6/18/18, 12:30 AM
^ wonderful tale with us. My bad.
Brock11752
6/18/18, 12:27 AM
It always happens. When a story becomes this popular this quickly, it's bound to spark a little jealousy. But I notice the first two or three posts were complaints but all of the rest have been praise. Rarely does a story on this group get this kind of overwhelmingly positive response. So that only goes to prove that your story has definitely struck a chord with a whole lot of readers here. Personally I love the pace you are taking. Not too fast, not too slow. Just right. Explore each superheroes' submission to the RingMaster before Superman succumbs as well. Let it slowly unfold until The Man of Steel finally fall under his power at last. That's great storytelling. And thank you for sharing your wonder tale with us.
Anonymous
6/18/18, 12:09 AM
love this chapter cant wait for more
OLIVER
6/17/18, 11:35 PM
I BET ANY WRITER HERE WOULD TAKE 3 DISAPPOINTED COMMENTS FOR EVERY 20 COMPLIMENTARY COMMENTS! 23 COMMENTS IN LESS THAN 24 HOURS IS VERY IMPRESSIVE BY ANY ONE'S STANDARDS, LET ALONE A FIRST TIME AUTHOR! THERE'S LOTS OF WRITERS ON THIS SITE WHO WOULD KILL TO GET OVER 20 COMMENTS A CHAPTER! SO KEEP ON DOING WHAT YOU'RE DOING BECAUSE YOU'RE OBVIOUSLY DOING SOMETHING RIGHT!
Anonymous
6/17/18, 11:22 PM
I'll take 3 "disappointed" comments for every 20 complimentary comments any day! God job, Clown boi!!!
6/17/18, 11:00 PM
Lovely story! I'm particularly struct at how you lay out the threads of the story and how they all come together at the end - that's really wonderful. Great writing!