Recent Comments

OLIVER
6/17/18, 11:35 PM
I BET ANY WRITER HERE WOULD TAKE 3 DISAPPOINTED COMMENTS FOR EVERY 20 COMPLIMENTARY COMMENTS! 23 COMMENTS IN LESS THAN 24 HOURS IS VERY IMPRESSIVE BY ANY ONE'S STANDARDS, LET ALONE A FIRST TIME AUTHOR! THERE'S LOTS OF WRITERS ON THIS SITE WHO WOULD KILL TO GET OVER 20 COMMENTS A CHAPTER! SO KEEP ON DOING WHAT YOU'RE DOING BECAUSE YOU'RE OBVIOUSLY DOING SOMETHING RIGHT!
Anonymous
6/17/18, 11:22 PM
I'll take 3 "disappointed" comments for every 20 complimentary comments any day! God job, Clown boi!!!
6/17/18, 11:00 PM
Lovely story! I'm particularly struct at how you lay out the threads of the story and how they all come together at the end - that's really wonderful. Great writing!
Scot6789
6/17/18, 10:48 PM
I am loving this story very much as a writer for the old site here I can relate to getting negative feedback as well. I encourage the writer to continue to show your creativity and please keep developing your amazing talent. I can relate as a writer that sometimes life gets in the way don't be discouraged you and your life are more important then a story. Keep your head up and to the negative people remember writing consumes time and energy so please be patient.
Luke B.
6/17/18, 10:43 PM
This story's a winner. One of the best Ive ever read! Thanks.
Anonymous
6/17/18, 10:23 PM
That was awesome Thanks
6/17/18, 10:02 PM
Imammintrigued for more
OLIVER
6/17/18, 9:49 PM
LET THE 2 OR 3 FOLKS WHO WERE DISAPPOINTED WITH THIS CHAPTER WRITE THEIR OWN DAMN STORY AND SEE HOW MANY COMPLIMENTS THEY GET! RINGMASTER ROCKS!
OLIVER
6/17/18, 9:44 PM
ANOTHER HOT CHAPTER! CAN'T WAIT FOR CHAPTER FOUR!
Satyroom
6/17/18, 9:43 PM
Loved the story. I think the people disappointed just wanted more superhero and less side character especially because it's been 3 chapters of side characters ;). But it's nice build up. Very hype for the next chapter.