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UchihaDEMS
6/17/18, 4:17 AM
No feet but a wonderful play... why does he has to wait to see some dude fuck? Though I know he need them hard, he can play around with other stuff!
Anonymous
6/17/18, 3:34 AM
I'm intrigued. Can't wait for next chapter.
Anonymous
6/17/18, 3:34 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
6/17/18, 3:08 AM
i think it was really great, keep up the good work!
UchihaDEMS
6/17/18, 2:22 AM
Love the feet part! Amazing
Anonymous
6/17/18, 1:53 AM
Are you guys serious about the "waiting" bullshit? It hasn't even been a whole month. Some writers on this site only post a few times a year and no one here is on any deadline. This is all for their own fun. Calm your shit.
Anonymous
6/17/18, 1:28 AM
Well I waited all this time for this? I agree it seemed unstructured. I thought this chapter was going to be focused on Superman and it seemed all over the place. One can only hope it gets better.
Anonymous
6/17/18, 1:15 AM
I enjoyed it. It can feel a little unstructured at times though and I think that the first chapter wasn't really necessary since "the Barrys" are original characters with informed importance anyway. I think the story would be a lot stronger if you opened with the last chapter and then had this chapter with next chapter capping off Superman's involvement making it into a little trilogy. From there you could just choose to do whatever hero tickled your fancy in a one-shot.
Liam
6/17/18, 12:53 AM
Oh I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Anonymous
6/17/18, 12:49 AM
Really disappointing after the long wait.