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UchihaDEMS
6/17/18, 2:22 AM
Love the feet part! Amazing
Anonymous
6/17/18, 1:53 AM
Are you guys serious about the "waiting" bullshit? It hasn't even been a whole month. Some writers on this site only post a few times a year and no one here is on any deadline. This is all for their own fun. Calm your shit.
Anonymous
6/17/18, 1:28 AM
Well I waited all this time for this? I agree it seemed unstructured. I thought this chapter was going to be focused on Superman and it seemed all over the place. One can only hope it gets better.
Anonymous
6/17/18, 1:15 AM
I enjoyed it. It can feel a little unstructured at times though and I think that the first chapter wasn't really necessary since "the Barrys" are original characters with informed importance anyway. I think the story would be a lot stronger if you opened with the last chapter and then had this chapter with next chapter capping off Superman's involvement making it into a little trilogy. From there you could just choose to do whatever hero tickled your fancy in a one-shot.
Liam
6/17/18, 12:53 AM
Oh I cannot wait to see what happens next!
Anonymous
6/17/18, 12:49 AM
Really disappointing after the long wait.
Anonymous
6/16/18, 10:43 PM
Good story! I would have liked a slower description of how Brian spoils his good looks and his brain to become Dumby Jr, but it's a great story the way it is.
Anonymous
6/16/18, 9:28 PM
Musky ripe goodness! Thank you!
Oct 24, 2016
Anonymous
6/16/18, 9:21 PM
thats one hot story, Loved It thank you...
Anonymous
6/16/18, 9:15 PM
If every Liza Doolittle has such a generous hunky Doctor Higgins...pigs would fly.