Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/13/18, 3:47 AM
This was great! I agree with the other comment; it would be awesome if you reworked more Ice Bear stories. My vote is for Work Wife.
Anonymous
6/13/18, 3:00 AM
I like it!
Anonymous
6/13/18, 2:55 AM
Hey guys, its me. Sorry about the formatting, I had indented each paragraph beforehand on Word, but I guess the indents were taken away when I pasted it into the site.
Fagneto
6/13/18, 2:42 AM
I think he meant the link to part two. It wasn't working earlier.
Svplgsmslm
6/13/18, 2:39 AM
Excellent. Great ENDing
Anonymous
6/13/18, 2:33 AM
Unreal remix. You should do versions for the rest of Ice Bears stories
Anonymous
6/13/18, 2:14 AM
So hot! Damn! I'm still hard!!!
6/13/18, 1:35 AM
Really like what you've done here, particularly like the changes to their fashion sense. Convincing them to dress themselves as sluts, even if it's just around the house, is always a hot change to see. The only other thing, it would help a bit of you put an extra line between paragraphs, just to help break up the text. But that's just formatting, the content was excellent. Great work!
6/13/18, 12:52 AM
I had to push myself through this story. Ventriloquist dummies and clowns are the same genre for me: very creepy in a creepy, not scary kind of way. That said, it must have been a hot story because I read it all. As stated, I did like the creativity in the hypnosis coming in a different, unexpected way. And that said, in any sequel it would be great to take a guy who sees these things as creepy. The transformation from being appalled at the puppet and eventually calling it Master, could be very hot!
6/13/18, 12:34 AM
Love this. Absolutely completely love this. The slow subliminal mind control in this story is so great. Especially on his it's two people being slowly taken over. So hot. My only sadness is that while there is so much butt play there isn't rimming. Seriously though this is HOT!! Love it.