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Bibimbap
6/12/18, 7:43 AM
This is GREAT! your style is insanely hot, I like your descriptions and dialogues. The whole idea is fantastic, with so many possibilities! I love the parodic mocking uniforms and costumes, that's a nice for of humilliation, and it's always a big turn on for me. I totally agree with the guy who suggested a follow up with cowboys, I would love to see a very faggy cowboy, next to an extremely macho version. If you allow me a suggestion, I would love to read something with motorcycle cops (with tall shiny boots and all the sexy uniform), would be great to read something with your style abording that subject.
JerkinToSleep
6/12/18, 5:38 AM
This series is a treasure!! Very hot, can't wait to read chapter 4 for tomorrows jerk :p
CigarDADDY
6/12/18, 2:13 AM
What? No victory cigar for the now DOM winner?
Max
6/12/18, 1:54 AM
Loved John's transformation, especially his new outfit! Would love to see more of him and Hank's new lives and other transformations of different contestants if you want to continue it but this might be a story that works best as a standalone.
Max
6/12/18, 1:35 AM
That was incredible! What sticks with me is the hot dog scene - it's an image that is simultaneously hilarious and hot, and perfectly demonstrating to the clueless narrator as well as to the reader how he is already hopelessly transforming into a sloppy cocksucker, but also doing it in the most publicly humiliating way possible to such a homophobic asshole. Well-played, Stroppy Author, well played. ;-)
williamlebeau4@hotmail.com
6/12/18, 1:31 AM
amazing
Sthessexguy
6/12/18, 1:04 AM
Please hurry up with that sequel
6/12/18, 12:55 AM
Fantastic work, color me interested in a sequel
6/12/18, 12:52 AM
How about a different route on a sequel? Going to the space station you may only end up repeating the transformation process. What about this is only the beginning of the transformation? An evolution into a hyper masculine, man only world. Taking today's norms of sports, business, politics, family, friendship etc, and transforming them into a world of all infected men...the new norm, the amoeba is just as natural to the men as microbes in our bodies are to us. And reproduction off all male offspring is done in some way with the goo...all male, all men, all horny and all man to man. A world we all would want to live in.
6/12/18, 12:19 AM
Incredible story! I hope this becomes a series!