Recent Comments

6/11/18, 2:16 PM
Oh wow nifty. Nice ending. Nice story. Sweet and adorable and oh so enjoyable.
6/11/18, 2:04 PM
I really liked the concept you've set out here, and there's some great visuals. I do love a man in a mockery of a uniform. A couple of parts you've got different characters speaking in the same paragraph, which makes it a little confusing to follow, I think putting them on new lines would really help out with that. Very fun, thanks for sharing!
Anonymous
6/11/18, 1:50 PM
This is such a good story! Many thanks :)
Anonymous
6/11/18, 1:32 PM
Beautiful ending
Anonymous
6/11/18, 11:37 AM
Let's see what Brad will do in front of his master. Maybe Daniel or some others will be there,too
Anonymous
6/11/18, 11:26 AM
please continue the chapter
Jun 10, 2018
Anonymous
6/11/18, 9:26 AM
I really liked the first half or so but I felt the transition from caustic nerds to himbos was a little too swift. A lot of the description of the dumbing down I liked... I'd enjoy reading more extended material about that in another future story if you're so inclined.
6/11/18, 9:15 AM
I loved the ending!
6/11/18, 8:54 AM
Awesome story!
6/11/18, 8:54 AM
Cheers, the story was initially going to be a one-parter, but I had a few more ideas that amused me too much to leave. There'll be one more shortly.