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Anon
10/5/24, 8:20 PM
I think overall, Tom is making a very good point about all of this. He's been where Mullins is now to some extent- having lost the ability to be with his child- and he knows Mullins has literally lost to some extent his family, the stability of his life, is still clearly spiraling, and now just lost Zach due to pack politics. Pete can try to deny this all he wants and spank Tom as much as he wants and hope that somehow it'll all work out, but I really doubt that is going to happen- he might have spanked Tom, but he didn't deny anything he said- I think he knows there's a very real possibility of what could happen. Not to mention that last scene where Mullins seems to be going after somebody else...I really think he's starting to slip into trying to use short term pleasure to cope with everything. It's not going to end well. There's a darker aspect to Mountain Peaks now in that while it is still a means of refuge and livelihood for Yousef- it's literally a grave necessary for their survival in some ways. Nothing to be done about that though- it is what it is. Yousef's fear of what is occurring to his family and his tensions over his wolf self and what was before are well done- I think that Yousef's concerns are very valid in his discussion with Carlos- who is also clearly hurting from a loss. I think there's a somewhat eerie feeling in how Carlos seems to imply human loss and wolf loss are somehow...tiered? That the former is somehow lesser than the latter. Yousef clearly doesn't find that all that great- but I think Carlos is making a point that wolves and their dynamics are different from humans- and the loss in light of that can be more in certain ways. But Yosuef has a point that it shouldn't be a competition of grief between them either. Their discussion about how embracing the wolf doesn't mean abandoning what came before I think is very therapeutic for Yousef- and I think he makes it a point that bringing up past orientation at this point probably isn't going to help much. Larry on the other hand is nice for being angry about Toddson regarding what he said to Yosuef, but his interactions with the law enforcement are chilling in a different kind of way- fact is, Mullins did kill two men in cold blood and potentially ruined a man's life like what happened to him with Zach- self-preservation and wolfish instincts play a mitigating factor here, but there is a darkness here- so the officer has every right to figure out about these vanishings- these rangers and folk had loved ones- and the most insidious thing about the wolves is cutting people off from that. At the same time, Larry has a duty to keep the pack safe- if humans ever got their hands on them it wouldn't end well- so him scouting out this law enforcement agent to bring to their side makes tactical sense- the gun oil clue implies somebody was likely self-pleasuring- likely that agent. But that whole exchange has a very eerie feeling. The fact that the other two were Zach's cousins...there's something horribly tragic about that. Somewhere out there, there's a family who knows their sons are not coming home. Ultimately, the wolves had to do it to keep themselves safe- to keep the pack including those who didn't do this to not wind up being harmed- but it doesn't make the sting any less. The fact that there's amish wolves is fascinating because I honestly wonder how Anabaptist theology figures into that. The canadian wolves seem to likely congregate in remote areas of the country (which suddenly leaves me with a very eerie feeling considering british columbia and the highway of tears- an infamous stretch of highway in Eastern Canada where for years indigenous women mostly (but also men) have disappeared...usually due to the works of serial killers...) As for Yousef's thoughts, I find how he finds prayers to god yourself somewhat innapropriate. Theoloigcally in muslim scripture, there's many times prophets or individuals called upon god to give them things- Zakariah to have a son (John the Baptist) for instance- the wife of the pharaoh for safety from her husband etc. But I think this is in context moreso about not denying god's omnipotence- he already knows. Yet at the same time, an argument could be made that calling out show sincerity and devotion. At the same time, him being taught to pray for others shows a remarkable sense of maturity and kindness. Him invoking Luna in this context is somewhat interesting- though I see it less as him seeing Luna as a god beside god- but more a helpful spirit to ask for assistance for Carlos, in accordance with muslim beliefs. As for Mullins...he's clearly not okay, but he needs to get himself together. If he keeps doing things in the short-term, it's going to hurt everyone. Either that, or he's going to wind up with more blood on his hands. Worst case scenario, he's going to keep being reckless and they will all get found out. And frankly speaking- if that happens- he can kiss ever seeing his family again- they will likely look upon him as a monster who ruined families for his own pleasure, who sought out individuals to sate his own lust not caring of what happened to the other- becoming a figure akin to some of the serial killers of the late twentieth century in a way. There's a very insidious element to how Mullins clearly struggled with what happened to him but is more than happy to sate himself and cause that to others- maybe he believes it'll all work itself out- but he clearly is not okay. At the same time, it seems that the wolves are instinctly driven to find mondjugen to turn- but the outburst about how Mullins didn't vet the person implies there are rules for turning people- they don't just do it willy nilly- that he is clearly disregarding. Larry at least has the excuse that he may need to turn the law enforcement officer to keep everyone safe- but even if that were the case there's no reason to believe that said officer might not have plans of their own to either reform the means of obtaining mondjugen or something else once he becomes one- and Mullins right now needs to stop being so reckless.

Anon
10/5/24, 8:49 PM
@Anon I think i just realized I miswrote something. For me, Yousefs views on personal prayers are interesting because it seems he was taught that prayers to God about yourself are inappropriate as he already can listen to them and it's better to pray for others. There's definetly a principle of compassion and respecting gods omnipotence in that view, but I find it intriguing considering it can also be argued that calling to god for yourself is a sign of devotion and humility and trust. It's interesting to think about either perspective.
10/5/24, 6:23 PM
Another one knocked out of the park.🎉
10/5/24, 5:59 PM
I absolutely love your drone stories. I can completely imagine myself in Tyler's place. Being extremely aroused as my body moves on it's own as I insert the gag and don the rubber hood, forever sealing away me former identity. Being commanded to say say "I'm happy to be a drone" and unable to stop myself from doing so but knowing it to be completely true. I would love nothing than to climb into one of those storage pods, succumbing to the programming, feeling my mind and thoughts slip away. Eventually emerging as another mindless obedient drone among many.
10/5/24, 5:37 PM
Great start……interesting content/idea & very nice cliffhanger ending……can’t wait to read what’s coming next…..should become a huge series
10/5/24, 5:26 PM
Interesting start……can’t wait to see what happens/where it leads…..
10/5/24, 4:44 PM
The story is good , but it needs a little hope here a there Defoe the demon arrives. Like the father is smart. He won’t want his house smelling. If they don’t let him was his bedding it will smell up the other parts of the house. And drag him to his shower, then piss on him. A slave needs food to do the labor. Not enough or grow strong, but to do the work correctly. And the father needs to teach the other son, not to brake your slave to the point you don’t have one. Then you have fine someone else and start over. He should get good free food at school to keep hope alive for just a bit longer. The friend is good though. And that Omar guy should have come right before he was to head home thinking he made it through school with minimal stress, the bam I Omar and the restroom scene. Food for thought.
10/5/24, 4:26 PM
Welcome Back !!! Love this series so much( so speical & so hottttttt) , can't wait to see what happen going on. ( Your fan from Asia ❤
10/5/24, 3:31 PM
Great work, as always. I’ve been reading your stuff for ages, but I don’t remember ever coming across this one back in the day. Anyway, I’m glad you reposted it here on GSS. Your stories are extremely enjoyable for all of us rubber/drone/mind-control fetishists. Thanks for all the hard work.
10/5/24, 1:22 PM
Another great chapter, Jack. You always have us wanting more.
10/5/24, 8:36 AM
Hey @cigarcop, I loved this story and also the writing there is something dream-inducing in your words and how they are strung together, so please do NOT change your style. Love the concept, love getting the story from two angles, love the gear-fetich. Looking forward to the next chapter! Huge thanks. Billy