Recent Comments

Max
6/10/18, 11:51 PM
Interesting! You're really good at writing exposition in a way that seems natural, same as in the earlier chapters. Retconning a character like this into the story is definitely a surprise but I see it opening up a lot of story possibilities. But I really hope we'll get a look at Mack and Jimmy's new lives as Priapus Pictures exclusives sooner rather than later. And I hope bringing Saul Bennett to justice doesn't bring the hot transformation fun here to too soon a conclusion. Are you looking to wrap it up in the next chapter or keep things going?
6/10/18, 10:42 PM
Oh cool. Nice stuff. I like how he kept the intelligence.
Anonymous
6/10/18, 10:28 PM
Really happy you are posting again. And an end to Possession with Intent would be fantastic!
EdyRobles
6/10/18, 10:14 PM
This is very hot, more please. A question, what happened to the order that Brad was given to ejaculate into his shoes
Jun 10, 2018
IvorySilk
6/10/18, 10:10 PM
Thank you both for your lovely feedback! And @LongtimeFan, I will take all those things into account for future stories and am really glad the escape room came out realistic as I've personally actually never gotten play any before. Hopefully in the near future. XD
Jun 10, 2018
Lenny
6/10/18, 10:07 PM
Love the escape room, nice change of venue. I also liked the diversity.
Jun 10, 2018
6/10/18, 10:02 PM
That was great fun. Hit several of my buttons there. Please keep writing and thanks TC
whitechap_e1
6/10/18, 10:01 PM
Great to be back. Thanks for your kind comments. I've been wondering about adding a final chapter to the Possession with Intent series which I wrote in East London vernacular years ago when I was doing adult literacy classes. I see it's still up on this website but the grammar looks a bit fucked (the sins of youth)
Jun 10, 2018
LongtimeFan
6/10/18, 9:54 PM
I LOVE THIS STORY. First and foremost, muscle growth (especially in the butt), dumbing down, and general devolution into sexy beasts are among my biggest turn-ons. Two: I always prefer when jerks get the treatment as opposed to decent human beings. :p And three: as both an Escape Room lover (I’ve done 13!) and employee, I can say that the description of the room and even the exterior decoration (no visible sign, tucked out of the way) was extremely accurate. Hell, one of our puzzles is even a set of binary switches! Hats off to you for one of the best stories I’ve read in a while! :D
Anonymous
6/10/18, 9:45 PM
Finally a sequel after all these years! Yas