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Jun 10, 2018
6/10/18, 10:02 PM
That was great fun. Hit several of my buttons there. Please keep writing and thanks TC
whitechap_e1
6/10/18, 10:01 PM
Great to be back. Thanks for your kind comments. I've been wondering about adding a final chapter to the Possession with Intent series which I wrote in East London vernacular years ago when I was doing adult literacy classes. I see it's still up on this website but the grammar looks a bit fucked (the sins of youth)
Jun 10, 2018
LongtimeFan
6/10/18, 9:54 PM
I LOVE THIS STORY. First and foremost, muscle growth (especially in the butt), dumbing down, and general devolution into sexy beasts are among my biggest turn-ons. Two: I always prefer when jerks get the treatment as opposed to decent human beings. :p And three: as both an Escape Room lover (I’ve done 13!) and employee, I can say that the description of the room and even the exterior decoration (no visible sign, tucked out of the way) was extremely accurate. Hell, one of our puzzles is even a set of binary switches! Hats off to you for one of the best stories I’ve read in a while! :D
Anonymous
6/10/18, 9:45 PM
Finally a sequel after all these years! Yas
Anonymous
6/10/18, 8:56 PM
very sexy story
6/10/18, 8:08 PM
What a sexy continuation of the concept. Love the things with the butt. All in all so cool.
Anonymous
6/10/18, 6:41 PM
It was supposed to be predicable. The author told you that he was an 'homage' to 60s television. I thought it was hot, funny and cliche -- as it was supposed to be.
Anonymous
6/10/18, 5:20 PM
Not my cup of tea
stimle
6/10/18, 4:50 PM
Awesome story. Great plot, pacing and buildup.
6/10/18, 4:19 PM
Nice job on the transformations. I particularly liked the twink makeover of the narrator and how the piercings advanced it. Glad you allowed him to remember his old self the entire time.