Recent Comments

blankbot
6/11/18, 12:53 AM
PLEASE continue this story!
Max
6/11/18, 12:04 AM
Can't wait! I'm honestly really enjoying your storytelling - you really have a great sense of narrative flow that keeps the reader interested and a knack for characterization and dialogue. Of course the idea is super hot but it's a well-told story above all. Keep having fun with it!
6/10/18, 11:53 PM
Hiya Max. I want to keep this going just building in some other people as well as adding a few twists. Trust me the transformation stuff will still be there. I have plans for Mack and Jimmy don't worry. As well as Saul.
Max
6/10/18, 11:51 PM
Interesting! You're really good at writing exposition in a way that seems natural, same as in the earlier chapters. Retconning a character like this into the story is definitely a surprise but I see it opening up a lot of story possibilities. But I really hope we'll get a look at Mack and Jimmy's new lives as Priapus Pictures exclusives sooner rather than later. And I hope bringing Saul Bennett to justice doesn't bring the hot transformation fun here to too soon a conclusion. Are you looking to wrap it up in the next chapter or keep things going?
6/10/18, 10:42 PM
Oh cool. Nice stuff. I like how he kept the intelligence.
Anonymous
6/10/18, 10:28 PM
Really happy you are posting again. And an end to Possession with Intent would be fantastic!
EdyRobles
6/10/18, 10:14 PM
This is very hot, more please. A question, what happened to the order that Brad was given to ejaculate into his shoes
Jun 10, 2018
IvorySilk
6/10/18, 10:10 PM
Thank you both for your lovely feedback! And @LongtimeFan, I will take all those things into account for future stories and am really glad the escape room came out realistic as I've personally actually never gotten play any before. Hopefully in the near future. XD
Jun 10, 2018
Lenny
6/10/18, 10:07 PM
Love the escape room, nice change of venue. I also liked the diversity.
Jun 10, 2018
6/10/18, 10:02 PM
That was great fun. Hit several of my buttons there. Please keep writing and thanks TC