Recent Comments

6/10/18, 8:08 PM
What a sexy continuation of the concept. Love the things with the butt. All in all so cool.
Anonymous
6/10/18, 6:41 PM
It was supposed to be predicable. The author told you that he was an 'homage' to 60s television. I thought it was hot, funny and cliche -- as it was supposed to be.
Anonymous
6/10/18, 5:20 PM
Not my cup of tea
stimle
6/10/18, 4:50 PM
Awesome story. Great plot, pacing and buildup.
6/10/18, 4:19 PM
Nice job on the transformations. I particularly liked the twink makeover of the narrator and how the piercings advanced it. Glad you allowed him to remember his old self the entire time.
Buffy67
6/10/18, 3:12 PM
Great story. Looking forward to further chapters
MalSkin
6/10/18, 3:09 PM
its good to see that you have put something new up on here. missed your writing . I always enjoy seeing cops taken down and well written how he was - look forward to new chapters
Apr 24, 2018
6/10/18, 1:54 PM
Thank you, and thanks for commenting! Brevity is something I try to work towards. Granted, it's not always the best choice for fiction, but I find it helps me focus.
6/10/18, 1:36 PM
It's definitely how it should be played, it's just lucky these guys had someone handy to teach them the rules. Thanks for the comments on these, too. I'm happy to hear people are enjoying them, and what they'd like to see. And not to worry, no game night is complete after just one game.
EdyRobles
6/10/18, 12:54 PM
Please continue, I am a fan of this series