Recent Comments

stimle
6/10/18, 4:50 PM
Awesome story. Great plot, pacing and buildup.
6/10/18, 4:19 PM
Nice job on the transformations. I particularly liked the twink makeover of the narrator and how the piercings advanced it. Glad you allowed him to remember his old self the entire time.
Buffy67
6/10/18, 3:12 PM
Great story. Looking forward to further chapters
MalSkin
6/10/18, 3:09 PM
its good to see that you have put something new up on here. missed your writing . I always enjoy seeing cops taken down and well written how he was - look forward to new chapters
Apr 24, 2018
6/10/18, 1:54 PM
Thank you, and thanks for commenting! Brevity is something I try to work towards. Granted, it's not always the best choice for fiction, but I find it helps me focus.
6/10/18, 1:36 PM
It's definitely how it should be played, it's just lucky these guys had someone handy to teach them the rules. Thanks for the comments on these, too. I'm happy to hear people are enjoying them, and what they'd like to see. And not to worry, no game night is complete after just one game.
EdyRobles
6/10/18, 12:54 PM
Please continue, I am a fan of this series
Anonymous
6/10/18, 11:54 AM
is it a sequel to a ertic story with the same name? Great! please continue!!
Apr 23, 2018
Mr Cavanaugh
6/10/18, 8:59 AM
Absolutely loved this! I'm a big fan for "the villain wins" scenario and throwing in some identity theft where the Joker replaces Batman is even hotter so thank you for this great story. It's straight onto my annual list of favorite stories. I'm sure you're inundated with requests but something similar happening to Superman would be hot as hell.
Anonymous
6/10/18, 8:05 AM
Awesome. This is my jam. Always love your stuff, Hypnothrill, but if I could offer a suggestion of making the conversions a bit slower, with a bit more will-they-won't-they tension? Still enjoying this heaps.