Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/10/18, 2:24 AM
I loved it!! Hokey and hot!!!
Anonymous
6/10/18, 12:49 AM
While the premise was good, the story needed a lot more editing and formatting. We also got the idea that all the guys were going to be converted, so maybe the story could have extended the conversion of a few guys rather than rush as many conversions as possible with basically no narrative. None of the guys were shown fighting it really.
Anonymous
6/9/18, 11:23 PM
A whole bunch of chapters of slow buildup then "bang bang all done"? ..... Sigh.
Anonymous
6/9/18, 9:02 PM
Really great build-up. Excited to see where things go next...
Anonymous
6/9/18, 8:59 PM
Take what these people say with a grain of salt. You'll never impress everyone. Find your own voice.
Anonymous
6/9/18, 8:58 PM
I thought this was awesome --the focus on the butt growth had me dying. Congratulations and can't wait to see the next one.
Nero
6/9/18, 7:25 PM
Dude I was just thinking about this story! Your happy endings have quickly become some of my favourite stuff on the site, and I can't wait to see what Dale's looks like.
Anonymous
6/9/18, 6:53 PM
Such a shame JR lost Paul.
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
6/9/18, 5:42 PM
Isn't that how Twister is supposed to be played?
6/9/18, 5:28 PM
Hmm sexy. I really like the set up and I hope it leads to sex.