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Anonymous
6/9/18, 4:03 AM
Senator, I neither confirm or deny...
Anonymous
6/9/18, 3:47 AM
hot
Anonymous
6/9/18, 3:39 AM
Seen this before, just not the gay version. Twice, in fact. Night of the Creeps and Slither. Yawn.
Anonymous
6/9/18, 3:34 AM
Who do I have to fuck to get the next chapter? ;)
Anonymous
6/9/18, 3:08 AM
what's going on? The first 2 chapters were within 3 days of one another. Now it's been almost two weeks since then and no third chapter. Can you at least give us an idea when we can expect the next chapter? Thanks.
Cigarboycody
6/9/18, 2:32 AM
To paraphrase from Star trek II;"Yours is the superior writing skills"
Anonymous
6/9/18, 2:14 AM
Interesting
Anonymous
6/9/18, 2:07 AM
First of all I love this story. It might be the best on the site. I don't know. I haven't read them all yet. However. I beat my dick to this so many goddamn times that I had a fucking nightmare about it. Like one night I'm going to sleep, just chillin, and two seconds after I close my eyes my fucking roommate is acting all weird and shit. He had, like, a VR machine that everyone had all of a sudden, and everyone was doing weird gay shit. Basically exactly like this. Not that I wasn't mad into it, but I'm not interested in being brainwashed myself so lemme tell you I freaked the fuck out. My instinct was basically to get on a train to the next state over and escape, in case it was localized or something. But when I got on the train everyone noticed I didn't have their creepy ass VR thing and they started converging on me. I flipped my shit and freaked the fuck out and I ended up waking up before they got to me, and I woke up at 7:00 so technically it wasn't that bad of an inconvenience, but it took me two or three solid hours that morning for me to assure myself that it wasn't real, and even now I technically can't be 100% sure because I don't fuckin know if something changed and I just didn't notice. Dammit Hypnothrill
Anonymous
6/9/18, 1:38 AM
What a great story incredibly badly written. The language is that of a primary school kid. You need to build up the suspense more. For example, Tyler’s corruption is extremely quick and seamless. As though there is no reactance from him at all. Missed opportunity to show his struggle against an overwhelming horniness etc. Also, the storytelling is too abrupt. One moment the reader is following one plot line, the next, new characters are being added almost like an afterthought (see Nick’s introduction to the story). Great stories are often rewritten to finesse the language and develop a compelling story line/arc. This story has much potential but feels as though much rewriting is needed to make it exciting and enjoyable.
robbot
6/9/18, 1:36 AM
Please continue. I have to know also, how it turns out between Ryder and Chad. OMG. I keeping looking for the next Chapter