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Anonymous
6/9/18, 2:07 AM
First of all I love this story. It might be the best on the site. I don't know. I haven't read them all yet. However. I beat my dick to this so many goddamn times that I had a fucking nightmare about it. Like one night I'm going to sleep, just chillin, and two seconds after I close my eyes my fucking roommate is acting all weird and shit. He had, like, a VR machine that everyone had all of a sudden, and everyone was doing weird gay shit. Basically exactly like this. Not that I wasn't mad into it, but I'm not interested in being brainwashed myself so lemme tell you I freaked the fuck out. My instinct was basically to get on a train to the next state over and escape, in case it was localized or something. But when I got on the train everyone noticed I didn't have their creepy ass VR thing and they started converging on me. I flipped my shit and freaked the fuck out and I ended up waking up before they got to me, and I woke up at 7:00 so technically it wasn't that bad of an inconvenience, but it took me two or three solid hours that morning for me to assure myself that it wasn't real, and even now I technically can't be 100% sure because I don't fuckin know if something changed and I just didn't notice. Dammit Hypnothrill
Anonymous
6/9/18, 1:38 AM
What a great story incredibly badly written. The language is that of a primary school kid. You need to build up the suspense more. For example, Tyler’s corruption is extremely quick and seamless. As though there is no reactance from him at all. Missed opportunity to show his struggle against an overwhelming horniness etc. Also, the storytelling is too abrupt. One moment the reader is following one plot line, the next, new characters are being added almost like an afterthought (see Nick’s introduction to the story). Great stories are often rewritten to finesse the language and develop a compelling story line/arc. This story has much potential but feels as though much rewriting is needed to make it exciting and enjoyable.
robbot
6/9/18, 1:36 AM
Please continue. I have to know also, how it turns out between Ryder and Chad. OMG. I keeping looking for the next Chapter
Anonymous
6/9/18, 1:25 AM
Great story! Keep it Cumming ;-) Can’t wait to see Emerson’s seduction.
Anonymous
6/9/18, 1:07 AM
Love this so much. Can't wait to see what happens to Jules
LongtimeFan
6/9/18, 12:49 AM
I love this! Great first effort. Stories of muscle growth, inflation, and infestation are some of my favorites. :) A little constructive criticism: the descriptions of the guys read a lot like plain lists, and repeat quite a few times. Try to find other ways to describe their appearance, or mix up how you tell it. Back to what I liked—the scenes of the infestation and growing were top-notch, and each one was different, which is always cool. Wonderful work!
Anonymous
6/9/18, 12:30 AM
Love it!
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
6/9/18, 12:02 AM
Damn! Great to be made into a slut!
Anonymous
6/8/18, 10:40 PM
bahaha not that it bothered me but Bryce Harper is the name of this dumb-ass baseball player people are talking about all the time. Was that a name drop on purpose?
nyjogger4e@aol.com
6/8/18, 7:45 PM
Great story. Slow, smooth seduction. Love it.