Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/7/18, 4:03 AM
I'm intrigued at where this is headed. I agree with the comment above, but I understand this was a set up chapter.
Cigarboycody
6/7/18, 3:47 AM
Don't beat yourself up over it. It was readable and fuckin'HOT bruh
Stroppy Author
6/7/18, 2:56 AM
You're absolutely right. With all of my editing and cutting and pasting I was changing to third person and recut first person back in. If I knew how to edit it I would! Thank you!
Anonymous
6/6/18, 11:37 PM
Wickedly HOT ! VERY interested to see what other choices of brews he chose and who will be the lucky recipient of them. Where is that brewery located again ? ......
Anonymous
6/6/18, 10:24 PM
Gave the low scores for hotness as there isn't any in the short chapter and no real mind control or drugs used. WHY do I have the feeling that JR is going to be the new kingpin that replaces El Diablo ?
Anonymous
6/6/18, 10:03 PM
Short snippets but wicked HOT !
Anonymous
6/6/18, 9:18 PM
wicked HOT ! I did get a little confused close to the end and wasn't sure who was narrating the story. Seems that Brice ( Sammich ? ) seems to have the right dosages and is muscled and still has brains, good combo !