Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/6/18, 4:26 AM
Very long, and I personally Iost interest once it started becoming all about the racism. With that said, the slow and mortifying was suuuper hot and I love how you dragged out every agonizing detail of his humiliating change.
6/6/18, 4:08 AM
That's a difficult question, Pupscout. I think the answer depends on what we mean by "death." in this story, the victims' original bodies do die, but their memories and some of their genetic material is transferred to the new "pod person" body. In some of my other stories, the victims' personalities are erased and their intelligence is wiped; to me, that actually feels like more of a "death" than what you see in this story.
Mutabear
6/6/18, 3:26 AM
Loved it. Bring on the gym bros!
Anonymous
6/6/18, 2:08 AM
The underlying premise to the story is incredibly hot!!! More!!!
Anonymous
6/6/18, 2:02 AM
Great story! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
6/6/18, 1:33 AM
Why doesn’t your story show up on the main page
6/6/18, 12:30 AM
Firstly, I loved this story. It had everything I like: transformation, resistance with understanding beforehand, friends, Dads, sons. That said, "Invasion of the Body Snatchers" was one horror movie I did not like. It was just too much for me and I never knew what happened to the victims. Likewise in this story (although I do like it, maybe because it's all male and has no children in it like the Snatchers) But one question: when the vines took over the bodies, and the old body became a dried out husk, did the victim die or was he just transformed? The impression I got was they died but then they knew everything about their old lives including their relationships and the names of their friends, relatives. If they did not die, then multiply my likeness for this story 100x
6/5/18, 11:56 PM
I like the idea. Of a cop discovering something mind control-ly and getting effected by it. May be said cop could become dominant and make a collection of subby guys around him. But yeah I like the idea.
Anonymous
6/5/18, 10:22 PM
Wow
Anonymous
6/5/18, 9:32 PM
VERY hot !