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10/6/24, 7:40 AM
I really don’t like Sammy treating his brothers like Secondary subs. He call call him a slut but John can’t. He really is a bad person. He did call his brother weak bitches for men. And he wasn’t talk in a sexual way. He was saying he hates weak men, but uses them to get other prey. Then punish of they get alpha like.
10/6/24, 6:35 AM
This sounds like it is going to be fun! Waiting for the next chapter
Anonymous
10/6/24, 3:32 AM
will you update the story???
Aug 22, 2023
10/6/24, 3:29 AM
I just came back to this. Kind of reminds me of Johnny Cash singing " When the man comes around" as a young man; cocky and strong, then his remake 40 years later as an old man, reflective and penitent. I read this a year ago and recently had some health issues come up for me and a family member die and the story hit life on all points. It's both an inspiration for the future and a reflection of the past. Well done
10/6/24, 3:24 AM
Wow, loved it! Idk who I feel worse for. The mindfucked Colin, the Enslaved Jay, or me who just read this while locked for Locktober.
Anonymous
10/1/24, 5:27 AM
I wondered how long will the next chapter be?

Pcm
10/4/24, 10:22 AM
@Anonymous Done! Should be up in one or two days. Are you ready for another chapter of Eddie's torture?

Anonymous
10/5/24, 2:55 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) Ouch, the poor boy have it rough the next chapter huh? But yeah, I think I am ready to see the next chapter.

Anon
10/5/24, 8:34 PM
@Anonymous @Pcm Oh please no hasn't that poor man gone through enough? I fear I'm going to have a repeat where I go numb with slight grief again. How I hope he escapes and does not wind up with a fate worse than death....yet I also want to see what is going to happen. There's something tragic in how Eddie is becoming like the grandmaster was- the latter's trauma over his death led to him becoming reclusive and contributing to collin's fate and how they snared his family....I only hope Eddie doesn't turn into him due to grief or loss. None of this is going to end well and at this rate if he can't be alive as himself it's better he dies as himself. Any other path leads to the doom his abusive foster father initially planned for him.

Anonymous
10/6/24, 2:59 AM
@Anon Yeah, let's hope for the best for Eddie...
10/6/24, 2:43 AM
Need one for Daddy Parker having a flash back of his boy school days with his brother. They must have stories to tell, alone and maybe together. Because he was not able to tell Sammy his truth, that we all want to know about. And we want the Taylor’s son to get his fill of Sammy. Pay backs a bitch. And Sammy can Brake him if he really wants to. But I think they will be fuck buddie. Both Love to Top but will let a real Aplha they like top them.
Anonymous
10/6/24, 12:39 AM
can’t wait for the next installment! SO HOT
Zander
10/6/24, 12:03 AM
One of the best chapters of this story (I like the length and volume of chapters) better than the previous chapter. I hope the story is not finished and we will see more sex between Ian and Collin, where Jay watches and at the same time Collin uses dirty talk and becomes more and more perverted. But I also want to hope that Jay, seeing that the situation is getting worse with his boyfriend, somehow gets out of Ian's control (on his own because of anger or with the help of another person who found out everything by accident). I want to see the confrontation between Jay and Ian to save Collin and their life together. Will Jay succeed in doing this or not, of course, it's up to you, the author, to decide. But it would be nice for us readers to see two endings of the story: Good and Bad for Jay and Collin.
10/5/24, 10:04 PM
Don’t like this one, the younger did nothing to him. People just get greedy. you got what you wanted, by mind control. But to take his brother too, he needs the tables to turn on him.