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Anonymous
6/4/18, 3:18 AM
That was really good!!
Anonymous
6/4/18, 2:02 AM
WoW ! WHERE is that Chinese herbalists shop ? Maybe my 1" can get larger !
Anonymous
6/4/18, 1:47 AM
Please more!!
Anonymous
6/4/18, 1:47 AM
Yes, the cop just as I thought ! VERY hot !
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
6/4/18, 12:04 AM
Just give in. Succumb. THEY will win in the end anyway... so why delay the inevitable?
6/3/18, 10:52 PM
Thanks so much for the comments/ Max glad you enjoyed it. I do have plans for more so don't worry this story is by no means finished and there are clues in the stories about the fact that James / Jimmy is not totally alone. Absman. Wow...High praise from the master. So glad you like this and really happy you're writing another part to it. I'll be looking forward to it.
LongtimeFan
6/3/18, 10:36 PM
BRILLIANT! Every description—from Will’s being taken to the other guys turning into mindless muscleheads—got me going. And I must be too used to your work, Hypnothrill...as soon as I read the description of the cop, I said “OK, he’s already in on it.” :p That doesn’t make it any less great, though!
Cigarboycody
6/3/18, 10:33 PM
Another hot story?! I climaxed to the climax
6/3/18, 9:01 PM
Hey friends, absman420 here! Hard to type these comments with my cock so hard. Damn nice story progression! I've really been enjoying it. That said, I've been so inspired by Tattcub, I'm actually writing a chapter myself! How funny is that? Inspired by my original story, Tattcub wrote this -- and inspired by this, I'm writing another (later) chapter in the saga of Saul Bennett. Look for "Twink Number Twelve" coming soon from yours truly! Thanks Tattcub -- for this and that!
BlindSeer0
6/3/18, 8:48 PM
You did a great job with this story. Muscle growth and dumbing down are my two main kinks, and you wrote them amazingly here. You took someone elses story and made it your own. You should be proud. Saul is a great villain. He's an asshole mastermind that always has a scheme. In the original story he tricks a man and in yours he traps Max and James. But he's still not perfect. The client was able to go to James in the first place, and James surprised him when he spit in his eye. For all his tricks and his alchemist, he's not unbeatable. I know people will disagree, but to me the best villains are able to be defeated. Most (but not all) the best stories have the villain/antagonist defeated at the end. It doesn't mean there isn't loss or consequences, of course. Just that they get whats coming to them. Based on comments you've made, I'm hoping James has a trick up his sleeve and Sal gets whats coming to him (even if James and Mack can never go back to normal.) Anyways, great job. Looking forward to the next chapter. (Also, nice job getting a mention in about the original story with Saul mentioning his other plans across the country)