Recent Comments

Drew Noble
6/3/18, 7:53 PM
Very well written and great concept. The loss of identity is hot, would be interested to know what else happens to the boy. Is he a house boy? Does he stay in the dungeon? Does master do more than just stroke him ;)
Max
6/3/18, 7:14 PM
That was worth waiting for! Yes, James definitely made a few errors in judgment, but I have a feeling Jimmy will be much more polite and open to Saul's suggestions. ;-) I hope there will be another chapter. I'd love to see more detail on Mack and now Jimmy'a mental transformations as well as their physical ones, and their new relationship to each other. I know they are now massively dumbed down muscle sluts but it's always hot to see some awareness of their transformation, and also would love to see some reactions to the transformation and how James old life is to be dismantled. You do such a great job describing the sense of uncontrolled gay lust that overtakes James. He can resist much of Saul's conditioning but he just can't resist his new insatiable need for cock and muscle.... he hardly even seems to want to resist. The description of his transformation is so seductively hot. Just like the previous chapters, you excel at creating a steamy, dreamlike quality, I really do hope for more. ;-)
andyrew36
6/3/18, 7:05 PM
And to the other person thank you for the complement and the advice :). I made sure to fix the errors. It should be reposted with all the updates soon :)
Anonymous
6/3/18, 6:59 PM
Hot indeed. Now if I could only find that gym in real life!!
andyrew36
6/3/18, 6:54 PM
Thank you Mystranger for informaing of my misuse of the word “My.” I fixed t and should be available when it updates :)
Anonymous
6/3/18, 6:54 PM
Super hot! Mostly you call him Lucas or he, and use “his”(third person), but sometimes you call him “me” and use “my” (first person). It’s just kinda disorienting. It’s a little easier to stay in the super sexy flow of the story if you pick one or the other and stick with it :)
Anonymous
6/3/18, 6:39 PM
Awesome series
Andyrew36
6/3/18, 6:09 PM
If you see a specific area where it switches perspective in the story feel free to point it out for me because I don’t see what you are talking about. And I’m glad you all are liking the stories!!!
Andyrew36
6/3/18, 6:05 PM
Thanks! I will double check it twice for grammar next time! I don’t see where you are saying it switching between 1st and 3rd person, besides during the actual conversation.
Anonymous
6/3/18, 5:49 PM
Will the next chapter be coming soon? Cannot wait to find out what happens next!