Recent Comments

6/1/18, 11:56 PM
This is a lot of fun!
6/1/18, 11:17 PM
Totally not my fetish at all (Lief's ailment I find pretty disgusting) - but the story is well-written.
6/1/18, 10:51 PM
I really like your writing style, fantastic story!
Anonymous
6/1/18, 10:25 PM
Is Will supposed to return to the office and recruiting his colleagues using his IT skills or become a buffed trainer like Carter feeling pleasure by putting victims under mind control???
6/1/18, 10:10 PM
I'm so ready for Chapter 3
Anonymous
6/1/18, 9:53 PM
Confusing. Is the 'slut' the paparazzi guy ?
Anonymous
6/1/18, 9:40 PM
Ahhhh I was afraid Will would spoil it but reading he went to the police detective with the information I am feeling better. I'm assuming the detective just happens to be one of the two that are already gym members .... hehehe ... Will seems to be getting into the swing of things now :)
Body Modification
6/1/18, 9:28 PM
brilliant more please
Anonymous
6/1/18, 8:36 PM
The police should go and visit the gym too.
Anonymous
6/1/18, 7:55 PM
Absolutely amazing......you must continue please...maybe an arrogant business man who is ripped stripped tattooed and pierced and screwed as he licks pits ass and dick for a biker gang...anyway I digress but the story was terrific and the subject matter very erotic......please continue to write!!!!!!!