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Anonymous
6/2/18, 3:40 PM
Edit this please
Anonymous
6/2/18, 3:38 PM
Great story, was shocked to see that this was your first story on the site, no misspellings or any other errors. Keep writing, this story was amazing.
Anonymous
6/2/18, 11:24 AM
Really enjoying this incredible story. I have checked every day and more than once to see if the next chapter has been posted. Please don't make us wait to much longer ok?
Anonymous
6/2/18, 11:04 AM
Incredibly hot story! The detailed transition is really nice to read. Can’t wait for the next part of the series!
Anonymous
6/2/18, 9:46 AM
Hot hot hot !! Love it, always great!!
Anonymous
6/2/18, 8:08 AM
Part 3, please.
AgainstMyWill
6/2/18, 7:40 AM
This was so hot! Loved the detailed description of the rimming, that was really intense and so arousing... The shame is so well mixed-in. Thanks for writing this, I've been edging myself to it for an hour now :)
Franklin
6/2/18, 5:34 AM
For a first attempt, it's very good. Not only is it holding my interest but it's also quite hot. I hope you,don't mind a little constructive criticism. But I do think you need to work a little on structuring your sentences and your vocabulary skills. Try not to let your sentences go on too long. And use different terms sometimes instead of repeating the same word in a paragraph. But that's just something that will come to you the more you do it. Mind you, I am not complaining, just speaking from experience. So please don't take it the wrong way. I must say, you sure are quite a storyteller. The plot is very creative and shows you put a lot of thought into it. I want to tell you that I appreciate all your time and effort. In my opinion, there's not enough superhero stories on this site. And yours is one of the better ones I've read. So keep up the good work.
6/2/18, 3:16 AM
Though the sexy times are sexy I just wish that these stories had less of both "let's ruin the intelligence of those with smarts" and "lets blatently destroy the public life of them".
Cigarboycody
6/2/18, 12:34 AM
Once Will totally becomes a gym member, they will send him to college campuses to recruit new members