Recent Comments

6/1/18, 10:10 PM
I'm so ready for Chapter 3
Anonymous
6/1/18, 9:53 PM
Confusing. Is the 'slut' the paparazzi guy ?
Anonymous
6/1/18, 9:40 PM
Ahhhh I was afraid Will would spoil it but reading he went to the police detective with the information I am feeling better. I'm assuming the detective just happens to be one of the two that are already gym members .... hehehe ... Will seems to be getting into the swing of things now :)
Body Modification
6/1/18, 9:28 PM
brilliant more please
Anonymous
6/1/18, 8:36 PM
The police should go and visit the gym too.
Anonymous
6/1/18, 7:55 PM
Absolutely amazing......you must continue please...maybe an arrogant business man who is ripped stripped tattooed and pierced and screwed as he licks pits ass and dick for a biker gang...anyway I digress but the story was terrific and the subject matter very erotic......please continue to write!!!!!!!
Willie Cici
6/1/18, 7:30 PM
I've been without a computer for more than two weeks. I am only just reading the comments to this story today. When I started to include photos with my stories, the critiques often focused on how my descriptions suffered because I was relying on the photos. They were right. I corrected my style and made sure that the photos became the finale of a description. Every once in a while, my eyes find a collection of images that inspires a story. In the end, for this story, I felt that my descriptions were never going to capture the over-the-top nature of the images. It is what it is. As I have stated many times in the past, I write these stories because I have fun writing these stories. As long as I continue to have fun, I will write. If the readership enjoy my stories, great. If they don't, that's okay. Those who can, do; those who can't, preach.
Anonymous
6/1/18, 6:58 PM
Dang your imagination is amazing!!
Anonymous
6/1/18, 6:14 PM
Phenomenal
Bibimbap
6/1/18, 5:22 PM
Excellent! it was a very clever idea to use a knight, I like the idea. The humiliation is pretty cool too!