Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/1/18, 6:17 AM
Please continue
Anonymous
6/1/18, 6:16 AM
Hot and well written story with just the right pace. I'm looking forward to the next parts!
Anonymous
6/1/18, 1:53 AM
Loving it so far. How long is this story going to be? Is there going to be more superheroes in future chapters like Aquaman, Nightwing, Flash, Hulk, Green Lantern, Spiderman or Wolverine? Not a suggestion, just curious. Although I do have one request, please don't let the heroes escape.
Anonymous
6/1/18, 12:54 AM
Fuck, I've nutted to this like 4 times now. This is again, please continue!
Anonymous
6/1/18, 12:14 AM
Is Will supposed to be given a bodybuilder type body or running back type athletic body?
Anonymous
5/31/18, 11:47 PM
Love the tension!
Cigarboycody
5/31/18, 11:39 PM
Oh Will only thinks he is safe. He belongs to the gym, he just doesn't know it yet. Another great start to a great story
Anonymous
5/31/18, 8:33 PM
I went back to read the preceding stories as suggested. Those were intense and VERY hot. Now it seems like it's all going to fall apart because Will is going to expose it all.
Anonymous
5/31/18, 6:51 PM
This series is great. There hasn’t been a good time stop story in ages. Keep it up it’s so hot!
5/31/18, 6:32 PM
I'm glad this discussion has come up, and I'm going to add my own personal thoughts. I like some of Willie's early stories, but I have felt he has been moving towards quantity over quality. I like the changing part of stories, be that mentally or physically, and although Willie regularly covers areas I like, I now skip over most of them as those I have looked at seem to lack much detail, and I find the whole 'click here' thing lazy on what is really a text based site. I think this style of writing works well somewhere like Tumblr, where you can have pictures in amongst text, and is well suited to short stories/snippets. Orrinotica (https://orrinotica.tumblr.com/) has some brilliant short stories (well they're not normally long enough to be short stories, they're probably better called vignettes) over on Tumblr. A photo or two to set the situation/characters, along with some text. Everything in line, and no having to jump between sites to read a post/story.