Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/31/18, 10:19 AM
This really turned me on! I hope we see more work from you.
Anonymous
5/31/18, 9:39 AM
Love this and nice setting. Like how you installed characters into the play.
Anonymous
5/31/18, 9:08 AM
This is an interesting approach. I like it!
Anonymous
5/31/18, 7:57 AM
I wish Nelson was less cocky. He has this beautiful muscle jock desperate for him, and he’s not even thrilled about it. Guess he’s done this before.
AeonFlux
5/31/18, 7:43 AM
Ok....... since you're a commentwhore........ I just have to leave something....... again telling you I love your stories and how they work out in the end Kepp on fueling my imaginations
Anonymous
5/31/18, 7:41 AM
I hope Will is strong enough to spare his willpower to try to save Joey and others. I mean Joey and others are under strong influence to force Will to comply in return : )
Anonymous
5/31/18, 7:18 AM
Terrific
Anonymous
5/31/18, 7:11 AM
So so good
LongtimeFan
5/31/18, 6:50 AM
HellllllOOOOO! Been waiting to read this all day! :p Love the set-up: it’s somehow more fun to watch other people gradually transform through the perspective of a “normal” person. And the tension of whether or not Will can resist the brainwashing is interesting, too—fascinating to see a character in an MC story realize that MC is happening. Can’t wait to see the next installment!
HighFrench
5/31/18, 6:42 AM
Love the story ! Love the way he is trying to escape and be curious at the same time. Sure he'll be a good boy like the others soon enough.