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Gayboi
5/27/18, 11:46 PM
I love it. More as soon as possible please, and thank you.
A.
5/27/18, 11:43 PM
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Anonymous
5/27/18, 11:29 PM
Well written transformation story. There was a long build up through the stages of descent from unemployment, to the progression of the pot smoking, the unemployment collection process, leaving the first apartment and going uptown to the cheaper, more dangerous neighborhoods, to the falling away of his personality, to the new structure of blue collar work and bodybuilding. Quite a transition. Jake facilitated it, but I don't think he caused it. The cause here is not the point - it was more the process. Good story!
Anonymous
5/27/18, 11:19 PM
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!
Brock11752
5/27/18, 10:40 PM
Good job so far. I get the feeling this story is going to be very cool.
Anonymous
5/27/18, 10:10 PM
This story reminds me of the first story I red from you called brain feed. Well done. I love following your work
Anonymous
5/27/18, 10:08 PM
I really liked this - thank you! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Arsenal
5/27/18, 8:10 PM
You're doing just fine. I like the plot. Please continue.
BoydWunder
5/27/18, 8:05 PM
Looking at all of the comments here, you really ought to do a continuation to this story!
Anonymous
5/27/18, 7:59 PM
This is so hot. Maybe more chapters about different grooms ? Dominating them next time would be very hot as well