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Anonymous
5/27/18, 7:10 PM
Continue please!
Anonymous
5/27/18, 6:57 PM
Agreed. Fun, short and sweet encounter on a city street!
Anonymous
5/27/18, 6:49 PM
Other than a mistake in the middle this was a good addition. You wrote Robert instead of Alexander when he took a pic of him.
Martin
5/27/18, 6:20 PM
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BoydWunder
5/27/18, 5:57 PM
Interesting premise. Looking forward to chapter two.
Harold
5/27/18, 5:48 PM
Good start. Keep going.
Anonymous
5/27/18, 5:15 PM
The Stepford Wives, but The Stepford Pigs. Four couples move to a new job/ living estate. Their partners work but are subtly changed to want their partners to become sex pigs - urinal/ rubber pigs/ Muscle thong pig etc and each partner disappears and comes back different, to the horror/ worry of remaining friends.
Harold
5/27/18, 3:11 PM
You should do at least another chapter that fleshes out Superman's assimilation with a little more detail.
Jimmy
5/27/18, 10:49 AM
I think you ought to do a continuation to this story!
5/27/18, 9:01 AM
I'm not sure how you took that message from this story, Miles. Maybe you need to work on your close reading skills. And your punctuation.