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Anonymous
5/27/18, 5:15 PM
The Stepford Wives, but The Stepford Pigs. Four couples move to a new job/ living estate. Their partners work but are subtly changed to want their partners to become sex pigs - urinal/ rubber pigs/ Muscle thong pig etc and each partner disappears and comes back different, to the horror/ worry of remaining friends.
Harold
5/27/18, 3:11 PM
You should do at least another chapter that fleshes out Superman's assimilation with a little more detail.
Jimmy
5/27/18, 10:49 AM
I think you ought to do a continuation to this story!
5/27/18, 9:01 AM
I'm not sure how you took that message from this story, Miles. Maybe you need to work on your close reading skills. And your punctuation.
Anonymous
5/27/18, 6:59 AM
I dont know how to get into the forum here. tell me what direction you guys want to go and I'll write spin offs.
Anonymous
5/27/18, 5:58 AM
YAAAAAS amazing!
RiderVitalli
5/27/18, 4:10 AM
I'd pay to commission a fleshed out, detailed story based on that hanky code idea!! =O
Anonymous
5/27/18, 2:07 AM
Thanks for the warning Tkhon, but I think the length is perfect ! A thorough telling of the story of how a COWBOY is made and be able to see his progression through the training videos. To complete the farm, farmhands are needed and we see how they are groomed as well. As the comment above more detail on the clothing would be nice and maybe work in some of the hanky code ( ? lol ) also doen't every farm have a 'watering hole' where cowboys and cowhands go to skinny dip ?. I also think real cowboys now how to use a rope too ( wink ) and they wrangle their cowhands so a little BDSM could be added in I think. It is a VERY erotic story, thank you !
5/27/18, 12:00 AM
"The Thing" perhaps? Similar body snatching premise with similar paranoia. Or "Slither." That one involves an alien hive mind. Not body horror, but "Salem's Lot" involves vampires taking over a small town. Change it to gay jocks and it might be interesting . . . I can picture the window scene :)
Bibimbap
5/26/18, 11:47 PM
So HOT! I love cowboy stories, and there's not enough of that! I'm afraid cowboys are not exactly on trend, but there's some of us that love the style and gear. It's a great story, I love it. I like the pace of the transformation and the situations. I would have loved if you'd had added a scene of sex just wearing boots and hat, or more descriptions of the clothes and his perception about it, but that's just my particular preference (cowboy's clothes drive me crazy).