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LongtimeFan
5/25/18, 8:51 PM
AWOOGA! This stuff is hot hot hot, and scary, too—love the idea of there being nowhere to run. And I really liked the foreshadowing with the description of the mall’s stores as “empty, dried-out husks” sucked dry by Amazon. You’re amazing! Now, to your second question. Unsurprisingly, I looooovveee mind control movies (the fetish manifested early...) so here are a few possible suggestions! -“The Faculty”—this 90’s horror film is about aliens taking over a school and making everyone brainless drones...actually, it’s very similar to your own “Musclehead: Tyler’s Journal.” So maybe not that one. :p -“The Stuff”: 80’s Classic about an impossibly delicious goo that bubbles up from the ground. One bite makes people hopelessly addicted...and literally hollows them out. I can see you doing a lot with that! Plus the “stuff” pun writes itself. :p -“Disturbing Behavior”: a young James Marsden (HOOOOO boy) plays a “bad boy” at a school where the mindless preppy elite “Blue Ribbon” society seems to be abducting kids like him and turning them into identical, empty-headed popular kids. -“A Nightmare on Elm Street”: I can see you doing a lot with this one. A gay man is put to death in an ultra-conservative town, and uses his powers of dream manipulation to take revenge on his killers’ male descendants. Fall asleep and wake up a new man... Those are my thoughts, such as they are. Hope they help!
Anonymous
5/25/18, 8:22 PM
Make him be a part of the football team
Anonymous
5/25/18, 8:18 PM
Nice
TheGerman
5/25/18, 3:02 PM
"So many boys, so little time" is said. You can't claim that in this case 😄 Everything is in the story, what have to be in it: comprehensible plot, very cool/hot, great style of writing. Recommendable to read for many gays.
Anonymous
5/25/18, 2:14 PM
No don't let it end this way. Please tell us what happens to superman next.
Anonymous
5/25/18, 12:44 PM
You are the most productive writers in the history of this site; I love your style and appreciate your consistency as well as your creativity (and time). Having said that, I wish to see a sequel or prequel : ). Too hot to end here, it’s killing me.
Martin
5/25/18, 11:06 AM
Anyone can edit the tags, looks like someone removed it... I added it again.
TheGerman
5/25/18, 9:33 AM
It's absolutely legitimate to write only a short story which doesn't desripes something closer. Totally okay. There must also be room for stuff like this. But two or three sentences about why or how a transformation is coming about should be possible. It's a little bit pity, that tis is missing. "Magic" is the category - well then...
TheGerman
5/25/18, 8:16 AM
There are quite a few agent stories. So the danger is of being compared to the "competitors". That's why it's good to write such a story in detail, not to short, with a few chapters. So far, that has worked well. That all factions administer a truth serum by sperm is a pretty nice detail in my opinion.
5/25/18, 7:12 AM
As someone who has written a couple of stories and am also an avid reader. I can appreciate this story for what is was. Willie is one of the more prolific and better writers on this site. Even this story was a personal effort that should be appreciated, even if it isn’t your personal cup of cum... err tea.