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Trust Boy/Captain
5/25/18, 6:06 AM
Is the superhero tag missing from this story now for anyone else?
Tattcub
5/25/18, 5:59 AM
I think there's totally a place for these stories too. I dunno about lazy but it means that the whole inspiration for the scene was from an idea based on a pic. I think that's pretty cool. I will admit that I prefer where my mind is left to imagine the event along with the description. But when it comes down to it folks, none of us are here for literature. We here to get our rocks off. If it works then what's the problem? It's great to have praise and feedback when it's constructive I really like getting it myself. But if you just want to criticise someone for turning out a story, one of a multitude from one of this site's most prolific writers then make damn sure it's for the right reasons and done with some style for pete's sake. Some of you who don't write and just criticise try dropping a story here sometime why don't you?
LongtimeFan
5/25/18, 5:58 AM
Hi, Willie! I want to put my two cents into this “debate,” as it were. One thing I love about this site is that there are so many options available for choices. “21-Year-Old Scotch” was a story I read for pure pleasure—it wasn’t masturbation material, and I teared up throughout. I still turn to “Musclehead: Tyler’s Journal” for a slow build of erotica and my favorite kinks. Willie, your own “The Cornfield” was poignant and wistful. This site goes from no sex at all (maxhockeyjock’s original “prepification” stories) to hardcore, bareback, double-penetration incest (yes, Edlam, I’m talking about you). :p And if a kink ISN’T present, we can write our own stories to share! All of what I’m getting at is that not every story is for every reader. Willie is one of the most prolific writers on this site, and I’ve proudly read (and “enjoyed”, nudge nudge) many of his stories. I like some better than others, and sometimes I DO just want to look at gorgeous hunks and read something quick and dirty. And remember, all of these authors write for free! That doesn’t mean we can’t offer constructive criticism and express dislike, but policing what people write and trying to dismiss someone’s whole list of works just because you didn’t like a single story seems unfair. And finally, keep writing what YOU want to write, Willie! You’ll always have at least one reader in me. :)
Martin
5/25/18, 5:21 AM
An age of 18 is not a requirement. Fully sexually developed is the only requirement. I'm not a friend of arbitrary and artificial thresholds like "18 years old".
Anonymous
5/25/18, 4:19 AM
This is super hot but..the part wher he asks if the kid wants to plat outside makes me a little uncomfortable . How old is this kid? 18+ I hope ._.. I love all your stories and you always get me off with your writing but that statement just kinda made me go ehhh.
Arsenal
5/25/18, 3:40 AM
"Unfortunately this one is just a oneshot for now, but i may write another chapter sometime, sorry to disappoint!" Sorry to read this. Considering this is your most popular story, I really don't understand your decision. If you can write an ongoing Peter Parker story ("Revenge is Sweet "; "Symbiotic Corruption"; etc.), surely Superman worth a few more chapters
Anonymous
5/25/18, 1:27 AM
I like this story but, as I said for another of yours, I'm a big fan of happy endings. I feel so sorry for Wes, I hope he will find a way out of his situation together with Mike. I imagined they could go on a journey to recover their lost memories.
Anonymous
5/25/18, 1:20 AM
I loved your story but I'm a big fan of happy endings so I hope that Sam will free himself (are the flashes he experiences a hint towards this development?). I liked the way you developed his character, the final part with his brother was moving. Also Jamie is devilishly mean, scary and disturbing but definitely memorable. Best of luck for your work.
Swizzington
5/24/18, 11:57 PM
Personally I've never been a fan of the "to see X, click here" thing with a link to a photograph. It breaks the immersion, I guess. I would prefer a written description, even if it were only a basic one.
shortnlookn
5/24/18, 11:38 PM
It was hot but it wasn't up to your normal caliber of writing Willie Cici. While some of the comments may have come across as too harsh I do agree that this isn't the level of quality you have become known for around here. Maybe you are just trying something new or just wanted to pound something out quick this time, I just hope this isn't a shift to a new style going forward.