Recent Comments

TheGerman
5/25/18, 9:33 AM
It's absolutely legitimate to write only a short story which doesn't desripes something closer. Totally okay. There must also be room for stuff like this. But two or three sentences about why or how a transformation is coming about should be possible. It's a little bit pity, that tis is missing. "Magic" is the category - well then...
TheGerman
5/25/18, 8:16 AM
There are quite a few agent stories. So the danger is of being compared to the "competitors". That's why it's good to write such a story in detail, not to short, with a few chapters. So far, that has worked well. That all factions administer a truth serum by sperm is a pretty nice detail in my opinion.
5/25/18, 7:12 AM
As someone who has written a couple of stories and am also an avid reader. I can appreciate this story for what is was. Willie is one of the more prolific and better writers on this site. Even this story was a personal effort that should be appreciated, even if it isn’t your personal cup of cum... err tea.
Trust Boy/Captain
5/25/18, 6:06 AM
Is the superhero tag missing from this story now for anyone else?
Tattcub
5/25/18, 5:59 AM
I think there's totally a place for these stories too. I dunno about lazy but it means that the whole inspiration for the scene was from an idea based on a pic. I think that's pretty cool. I will admit that I prefer where my mind is left to imagine the event along with the description. But when it comes down to it folks, none of us are here for literature. We here to get our rocks off. If it works then what's the problem? It's great to have praise and feedback when it's constructive I really like getting it myself. But if you just want to criticise someone for turning out a story, one of a multitude from one of this site's most prolific writers then make damn sure it's for the right reasons and done with some style for pete's sake. Some of you who don't write and just criticise try dropping a story here sometime why don't you?
LongtimeFan
5/25/18, 5:58 AM
Hi, Willie! I want to put my two cents into this “debate,” as it were. One thing I love about this site is that there are so many options available for choices. “21-Year-Old Scotch” was a story I read for pure pleasure—it wasn’t masturbation material, and I teared up throughout. I still turn to “Musclehead: Tyler’s Journal” for a slow build of erotica and my favorite kinks. Willie, your own “The Cornfield” was poignant and wistful. This site goes from no sex at all (maxhockeyjock’s original “prepification” stories) to hardcore, bareback, double-penetration incest (yes, Edlam, I’m talking about you). :p And if a kink ISN’T present, we can write our own stories to share! All of what I’m getting at is that not every story is for every reader. Willie is one of the most prolific writers on this site, and I’ve proudly read (and “enjoyed”, nudge nudge) many of his stories. I like some better than others, and sometimes I DO just want to look at gorgeous hunks and read something quick and dirty. And remember, all of these authors write for free! That doesn’t mean we can’t offer constructive criticism and express dislike, but policing what people write and trying to dismiss someone’s whole list of works just because you didn’t like a single story seems unfair. And finally, keep writing what YOU want to write, Willie! You’ll always have at least one reader in me. :)
Martin
5/25/18, 5:21 AM
An age of 18 is not a requirement. Fully sexually developed is the only requirement. I'm not a friend of arbitrary and artificial thresholds like "18 years old".
Anonymous
5/25/18, 4:19 AM
This is super hot but..the part wher he asks if the kid wants to plat outside makes me a little uncomfortable . How old is this kid? 18+ I hope ._.. I love all your stories and you always get me off with your writing but that statement just kinda made me go ehhh.
Arsenal
5/25/18, 3:40 AM
"Unfortunately this one is just a oneshot for now, but i may write another chapter sometime, sorry to disappoint!" Sorry to read this. Considering this is your most popular story, I really don't understand your decision. If you can write an ongoing Peter Parker story ("Revenge is Sweet "; "Symbiotic Corruption"; etc.), surely Superman worth a few more chapters
Anonymous
5/25/18, 1:27 AM
I like this story but, as I said for another of yours, I'm a big fan of happy endings. I feel so sorry for Wes, I hope he will find a way out of his situation together with Mike. I imagined they could go on a journey to recover their lost memories.