Recent Comments

Arsenal
5/25/18, 3:40 AM
"Unfortunately this one is just a oneshot for now, but i may write another chapter sometime, sorry to disappoint!" Sorry to read this. Considering this is your most popular story, I really don't understand your decision. If you can write an ongoing Peter Parker story ("Revenge is Sweet "; "Symbiotic Corruption"; etc.), surely Superman worth a few more chapters
Anonymous
5/25/18, 1:27 AM
I like this story but, as I said for another of yours, I'm a big fan of happy endings. I feel so sorry for Wes, I hope he will find a way out of his situation together with Mike. I imagined they could go on a journey to recover their lost memories.
Anonymous
5/25/18, 1:20 AM
I loved your story but I'm a big fan of happy endings so I hope that Sam will free himself (are the flashes he experiences a hint towards this development?). I liked the way you developed his character, the final part with his brother was moving. Also Jamie is devilishly mean, scary and disturbing but definitely memorable. Best of luck for your work.
Swizzington
5/24/18, 11:57 PM
Personally I've never been a fan of the "to see X, click here" thing with a link to a photograph. It breaks the immersion, I guess. I would prefer a written description, even if it were only a basic one.
shortnlookn
5/24/18, 11:38 PM
It was hot but it wasn't up to your normal caliber of writing Willie Cici. While some of the comments may have come across as too harsh I do agree that this isn't the level of quality you have become known for around here. Maybe you are just trying something new or just wanted to pound something out quick this time, I just hope this isn't a shift to a new style going forward.
5/24/18, 10:25 PM
[to nycboot] You put a smile on my face, sir. Not just because of your generous praise regarding my stories, but about you remarks on whether I can suspend time and give a more detail account on the assimilation / conversion process. I'm smiling because I'm actually working on a story that does just exactly that. In fact, and I hope I'm not spoiling anything, it will happen repeatedly throughout my next story and should take well beyond 2 - 3 paragraphs. So how about that? Are you intrigued? Lastly, I'm going to admit fault for not having more participation in the "Community" forums on gayspiralstories. That's completely my fault. I have explored that section but never felt any topics jump out at me But if I desire to more active and a participating member of this community, I shouldn't shy away from it. So thank you for reminding me about that. Anyways, I'm actively working on that next story. With Memorial Day just a few days away, I've got a busy weekend. I'm trying to crank the next story out. But it really really needs to be done right. Sometimes I feel like I have high-bars to hurdle over. I don't mind the challenge. I just know that with this next story, I really have something to prove. So keep an eye out. The working title as of now is: Deleted Scenes.
Anonymous
5/24/18, 10:18 PM
Can I get an invite to this pool party?
Anonymous
5/24/18, 10:01 PM
Any chance of seeing what Paul is seeing on the broadcast of the four men? :)
Anonymous
5/24/18, 9:50 PM
I also felt like it was a toss off - maybe just to check our response. I also would like to know how he came to control all these Himbos!
nycboot
5/24/18, 7:48 PM
Hi Nathan - thanks for "outing" yourself. I love this story! Like others have mentioned, aspects of this story can be seen in your work (e.g., the set-up reminds me of "When the Fantasy Comes True" and the tree business reminds me of "Brain Feed"). But as you grow you're not writing the same story over again - you're getting much more in tune with what the protagonists are thinking. I find this so hot. Reading a description of a guy fucking a tree is okay, but knowing internally that the guy much fuck the tree as part of his life - that is so much more thrilling and arousing (and I mean REALLY arousing). I wonder if you would ever experiment with minimizing the action and have most of the story be what's going on in the mind of the protagonist. Like in this story, when the needle pierces Nathan's skull (just like when the needles puncture Jake Bennett in "Brain Feed") - you dispatch it in about 2-3 paragraphs. Do you think you could "suspend real time" and describe what's going on in the victim's mind as he undergoes the changes? (I find this super hot.) Lastly, in your comment above, you wished that this would be a community. It is becoming such a community through Martin's wonderful innovation of the Community portion of the website. For example, I've loved reading M. Greene's stories but actually interacting with him makes it all the more exciting and personally fulfilling. You've always been very kind & forthcoming in the private emails we've exchanged, I hope you consider participating in the Community area.